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[REND] 14.2 - Human Rights of the Non-Humans

🕑 Added 2025-07-16 12:27:09 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

- I suppose it's because Erind wants a certain setup to be the main character first, or else it's not deserving of her. I'll add those lines about being a secret princess. They're fun. XD - edited the man -> person - 'Sufficiently progressed' is the most agreeable wording they probably have agreed upon instead of saying 'still has a human enough mind' or something like that. This is quite contrarian, so they sort of weirdly swerved the description. - Many times I've mistakenly have characters say Deen instead of Amber. - Sort of related to the training parts, I outline what I need to happen. For example, the training with Myra, and then a separate training with Deen. Then I have points why I need those scenes. When I get to writing them, they take longer than expected. I suppose that's because I'm more of a discovery writer even though I do try to plot. When it comes to discovery writers/pantsers, it's unavoidable to drag something out. The solution would be the revision stage. I do plan to cut down content when it comes time to turn REND into a book. Thank you so much for the help!

Temple (REND)

Whoops, thanks for the help!

InLucidReverie

muttered under my brought -> breath

Karp Paul

Was I a princess? Mom told me a few times that I was, but had never presented proof of our alleged royal lineage. Being a secret princess was reserved for the main characters. I had a long way to go before claiming that spot. - That is an interesting idea. Not about Erind being a princess, but about Erind's ego growing. -> That would be so cool if I was a secret princess. Secret royalty, secret Adumbrae. I would become an Adumbrae Queen! I would make Deen my lady-in-waiting. Wait... Why would I want to become an Adumbrae Queen? I don't want to be an Adumbrae if the first place. Is it Spooky Erind affecting my thoughts? the property of a recently infected man. -> the property of a recently infected person. - I think this is how a law professor would speak. A wave of angry murmurs crept through the room. Unsurprisingly, most people thought that the Adumbrae rights activists were crazy. I still did, even though I was an Adumbrae. It was insane to trust the infected. Didn’t people learn this from movies? Whether it be a zombie movie or an Adumbrae movie, it was always the wrong move to trust the infected. - A more interesting question would be "why would they formulate it this way - sufficiently progressed?". As if there were a way to slow down the progression or revert it entirely. Maybe somebody lobbied such wording? Maybe they knew about some development with "Adumbrae treatment"? Or did they simply decide that human dignity should remain while a human is not fully transformed yet? oh, Deen’s coming. Enjoy your lunch! - Why is he calling her Deen? Our last chapter for this week will be Erind and Deen training. - I suggest cutting down the training chapters to a minimum.


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