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[REND] - 21.2 - Little Golden Hood

🕑 Added 2025-08-29 13:06:08 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

- The 2Ms men don't really know at that point how strong Blanchette is. They might think she's just a bit above Mr. Ogre, which she isn't. And she's a huge prize if they do get her. - Edited the screaming man. - Also edited the stolen pickup truck. This is just me sometimes providing explanation that might be out of place. It's difficult to balance this because some readers might say that she did try to hide the key. - Implemented your other suggestions about food and BID on their way. - That part about emotions wasn't Erind being an empath. It's showing how the Cores are connecting with each other, which has been mentioned a few times before. And also the reason why Blanchette werewolf mode is listening to Deen. So, no, Erind isn't an empath. We'll keep her father out of this because she doesn't care about him much. Thanks for helping!

Karp Paul

“Will reinforcements get here in time? This dumb mutt had already broken out before!” - They should not try containing her. At this point, it should be obvious to them, that all they can do is try to escape. So, this guy should just try to distract her. “Please don’t kill me!” he shouted. “Let me go!” - At this point, Erind should not even bother trying to listen to anybody. I suggest replacing it with: He was screaming loudly, annoying my ears. A key that I hid or something. The thief stealing my food managed to drive it. Probably found the key. - A bit too reasonable in her state. How about: My food was running away! It can't run, can it? But it was running away! Somebody stole it! Had she given me food before? -> Did she give me food earlier? “If you continue doing this, the BID will come. Maybe Corebrings, too! Follow us!” - BID should be already on their way. BID. Corebrings. I know those words. They were strong, challenging prey. I growled, not wanting to leave. Staying here meant food would come. “Blanchette, I know you can hear me somewhere in there! Please!” Warmth coated my heart. This tiny creature… I could sense her emotions. She wanted me to be safe. Strong emotions. Reaching for me. I disliked emotions, but they were forcing their way into my mind. - This is a bit... strange, to be honest. Like, since when did she become and empath? If you want to lead Erind out of this state, here is my suggestion: BID. Corebrings. I know those words. They were strong, challenging prey. My father was one of them. I guessed so. He was dead officially, but I did not believe it. What if he shows up? Then everybody will see that I lied about his death. I will lose my face! My face? What was my face? A quiet nerdy girl, right? I should be short, quiet and friendly. These people know me. What if they tell everyone that I am secretely very tall? I can not lose my face.

Temple (REND)

Yep, the core is the way to make the werewolf transformation more convenient. Though it won't be used all the time, and has requisites so that it won't completely overshadow the red Blanchette.

Jayem

Ooh is this the core finally doing something? I was hoping she’d find a way to shrink or maintain her more humanoid wolf form without needing to completely cancel the transformation (I was also hoping she’d find a way to push the transformation faster but that might be too op) and it seems the core provides. I think. Looking forward to seeing where this goes!

Temple (REND)

- Thanks for the help proofreading! - Giant werewolf Adumbrae probably doesn't care for small fry brains at this point. - We're gonna need to brainstorm Pino next time haha. - Yep, Erind now has a reason to keep attacking 2Ms bases. Though we'll probably have the 2Ms relax their activities in LE or now. - Just the power of friendship transmitted through the cores haha - The shackles are for suppressing the Adumbrae power haha. More than a dog collar because it's metal. Maybe we can get an art of this for next volume lol.

Temple (REND)

I'll edit it. It's an actual tail haha. Thanks for pointing it out!

NeoJungleLover

Would her owner be Deen or technically Erind?

No Name

"Checking my back, I realized that I now had a long swishing tail of golden hair." -> Slightly confusing wording here, uncertain whether it's actually a tail, or just hair long enough to be one. Maybe use fur instead of hair?

ARIMA Maroon

Typos: Metal, not food. -> Food, not metal. They approached with their wide metal feet, the three toes in each one anchoring to the ground with each step. -> They approached with their wide metal feet, the three toes on each one anchoring to the ground with each step. A lot of difference! -> A lot different! ----- “We’re both Adumbrae! Let me live!” she pleaded while trying to stab my arm. Not very sincere. Squish. And the insect was dead. -> I think most natural Adumbrae that grow try to eat each other, not a very friendly type of creature. Also, interesting how Blanchette didn't eat her. She has an Adumbrae brain! I put it inside my mouth, chewed, and spat out the mangled remains. Disgusting! Metal mixed with so little flesh. I wasn’t even sure if the soft, chewy parts I ate were even flesh. Metal wouldn’t give me nourishment. Eating the pest didn’t satisfy me at all. I granted him his wish, and that was how he repaid me? What a waste of time. -> Maybe the booster could allow Blanchette to eat metal lol. On the other hand, this gives another reason to use Pino over Blanchette. Robot vs robot action. Not the man driving it. He didn’t have a chance to scream because he died from my fangs puncturing the roof of the pickup truck. A box filled with goodies should be here somewhere. But they weren’t fresh. Brains from the dead. Some important stuff too. Still, I chewed through the metal. -> RIP base Erind's plan to eat brains. She'll just have to get some more. Warmth coated my heart. This tiny creature… I could sense her emotions. She wanted me to be safe. Strong emotions. Reaching for me. I disliked emotions, but they were forcing their way into my mind. -> Clearly ExD is bleeding over into this universe. Jumping to my feet, I examined myself and saw that I was back to my Blanchette body. But there was something different. A lot of difference! My hoodie had turned gold. Shackles had clamped on my wrists, ankles, and neck, just like my vision. And a different sensation bothered me. Checking my back, I realized that I now had a long swishing tail of golden hair. -> Blanchette got a tail! My job here is done lol jk. Also shackles on the neck, like a dog collar? Maybe Deen could buy one for Erind in the spinoff lol. Excited to see what this upgraded Blanchette can do! Thanks for the chapter!

Vaporus

Excellent writing, good stuff!

Pibblepunk

Well that's fucking neat. Let's get Erind's brain back online and then we can figure out wtf is going on.

TheHornedOne

Golden hair? She really did go super saiyan I guess lol

Vick

While it's good the core saved her ass, the whole restrain and shackles piss me off. I would absolutly HATE to be shackled, even if for my own good. Worse still, it might be spiritual too. Well, it's a great chapter still so thank you.


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