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[REND] 22 - A New Face, A New Start

🕑 Added 2025-09-03 09:20:23 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

- Added that line about Deen's money. - I slip up sometimes with the meyou thing of SE. Changing that line. - I changed the 'you need more power' part to just making friends, which Erind should do. Thanks for the help!

Temple (REND)

Oh, I thought I replied to this one already. Sorry for the super late reply and thanks for the help proofreading! - The credits probably rolled after she swam away from the docks base. - We still don't know yet what the Mother Core is. - Yep, Pino making a comeback in Book 2.

Karp Paul

“I’m going to bet Deen’s money that this isn’t the real world,” I said. - SE can reply, "It's not Deen's money; it's her parents' money." You need me for that. - That is really strange coming from SE. Why is it suddenly "you" and "me", and now "we are the same"? You need more power. - She doesn't. I think she needs to be able to hide better. To be more subtle. Her constant growth in the Blanchette form showed that power is not really a problem. The problem is that she will inevitably attract Corebrings, and she is not ready to face them. So, another face could be a way to still be in the game, but without drawing too much attention.

ARIMA Maroon

Typos: Are you trying to pit me with the Core? -> Are you trying to pit me against the Core? ----- Ah, this could be the post-credit scene. -> But there hasn't been any credits lol. Maybe if Erind directs a movie she can just credit herself and that's it lol. I… dislike the intruder to our sanctuary, said Spooky Erind, with a smile. I couldn’t tell if she was truly angry or just messing with me. -> Clearly we need a Spooky Erind x Artificial Mother Core spinoff to get them to bond. But as for you, good job! That includes tapping into the power of the intruder. You wielded it well. -> And hopefully we'll see more of it with Pino. Also, maybe Erind can make it a goal to see the artificial Mother Core as a friend. It was the face of a mannequin, but with no eyeholes. There was a weird symbol on its forehead. Make friends using this. -> It's Pino time! Hyped to see her comeback. Thanks for the chapter!


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