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[REND] 17.3 - Steering Into Trouble

🕑 Added 2025-08-06 13:23:50 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

Yeah, Erind isn't intentionally trying to scare him. I'm getting the hang of side povs. They're usually a challenge because many don't like them, and that's because they're not handled well usually.

Temple (REND)

That's his superpower, lol.

Temple (REND)

Erind mentioned them in the early parts, during the Adumbrae Attack. I think a few mentions elsewhere too. The tiers are about the needed force to deal with it. T1, just regular police is fine. T2, going to need comexo and heavier weapons. T3, better bring in the special BID agents.

Temple (REND)

- Coincidences and misunderstandings are Erind's bread and butter lol - Thinking back in the previous version, Dario's team didn't really talk much about the giant werewolf at the docks. Maybe we can have that here now. - Progression fantasy! Lol, we have the tag. - It would be funny if OD thinks Erind is trying to become a Purple Bloom and will push her to do it. - We can visit the bunkers and maybe enter Eve through there this time. - I'm glad we did this criminal org side plot earlier than I orginally intended - Thanks for the help proofreading and sharing your thoughts!

Temple (REND)

So close and yet so far. Very difficult to guess that Erind's already like that without the Adumbrae.

No Name

Hmm... Unripe and Complete we've seen before, but did you ever introduce what these tiers represent?

KanadianKitsune

Overdrive is overthinking this lmao

Frozzendeth

Very funny chapter, he is scared shitless and i dont think Erind even noticed that. A couple of these povs every arc would be nice. No need for it to be the same person bit just a somewhat normal person reaching to Erind and other important characters are always fun

Vaporus

“Okay, then,” Red Hood said. “Thanks for the ride. I’m going to give you money for gas, but you’re probably rich with all your illegal stuff.” - 'I'm not going to' ?

Vaporus

Excellent writing, good stuff!

OmniHumanist

Typos: Red Hood probably wanted to hide while underground transformations. -> Red Hood probably wanted to hide underground while transforming. ----- Red Hood's showing up was proof that this was an elaborate scheme. -> Do coincidences count as elaborate schemes? I guess if you are into improv then yes. I imagine Erind could be a theater kid. She was a Complete Manifestation and probably a Tier Two, at the least. He bet that she neared Tier Three, but not quite there yet, or she would’ve flattened the docks without the need for distractions or planning. The fake Adumbrae and augmented dudes guarding the place posed somewhat of a threat to her. -> It'll be fun to see Erind climb up the different tiers of Adumbrae. Maybe the team can even spend time trying to classify the werewolf lol. She aimed to become stronger fast, strong enough to defend against Big Marcy’s counterattack. -> She's doing progression! Then, he’d dip before Red Hood decided to take a shot at becoming a Purple Bloom. -> Silly misunderstanding, Erind is trying to do the opposite. Although she can change her mind later. In the last version, Erind mostly tried eating mutants to stop SpookyErind, but then she just wanted to get stronger so she just ate mutants + Adumbrae. “Bunkers?” -> Now Erind can destroy stuff to her heart's content with no one watching! Unless she invites her teammembers. Or Erind could decide she just wants to get stronger by herself. I find the scenario entertaining. It also sets up a bigger role for the gangsters in the future. Of course, Overdrive will spread the legend of Red Hood and her organization, hoping to one day join it. -> Agreed, it's funny how they keep attributing more malice to Erind when she doesn't really have any bad intentions to them lol. Thanks for the chapter!

Metal(Liz)ard🏳️‍⚧️

It's funny how close overdrive is to figuring out erind if he just replaced adumbrae trying to be human with her having psychopathic behaviours instead


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