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[REND] 18.1 - Rambo Wolf Gal

🕑 Added 2025-08-07 14:46:48 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

Thanks for the suggestion! Yep, I'll cascade put the edits in the public chapters.

Karp Paul

I know it is too late, as this is already published in other places, but I still wanted to give a suggestion. “Clear! Don’t forget under the trailers.” - Add Erinds reaction in her inner monologue: Why would I hide under a trailer? It's too dirty! Never mind, back to business.

Temple (REND)

Consequences is Erind's middle name ahah.

NeoJungleLover

It surely won’t have severe consequences down the line.

Temple (REND)

Awesome that you like it!

Pibblepunk

Oh, this is the GOOD shit.

Temple (REND)

Lol, I can't recall the cutoff sentence. I'll just delete the rest after 'away'. Thanks for spotting the error!

InLucidReverie

"Overdrive sped away, driving very overly." Overly what?

Temple (REND)

- There might be the possibility that the Philippines will be under Japan or something. Or it's just too costly to hold onto Philippines for anyone after the Adumbrae War. - Erind probably would think it's too much to ask Deen for a car, lol - She'll be called Blanchette. We'll eventually see how that'll happen. - That's going to be crazy with that many POV XD - She's probably just dehumanizing the guards - Blanchette's bulks up a bit, but not like she's an anime character kind of huge. It's more that her body is becoming bigger too. - For the docks mission, I'm actually thinking of using a fight from Eve that I liked, the gun ogre one haha. - We'll probably leave Big Marcy out of this for now, so minus the gunship coming to get him - Yep, definitely first person for the new story. - Thanks for the help proofreading and sharing your thoughts!

Temple (REND)

Thanks for your support! :D

K. William Klaassen

He was just about to leave, but then Erind asked about a secret place to train and Overdrive mentioned the bunkers. That's where this chapter begins.

Frozzendeth

Fun stuff. Isnt the start of this chapter and the end of the previous one different? I thought overdrive drove away last chapter? And now he is staying.

ARIMA Maroon

Typos: Did I get geography right? -> Did I get the geography right? Gramps used to tell me that an underwater would get me if I didn’t listen to him. -> Gramps used to tell me that an underwater titan would get me if I didn’t listen to him. I didn’t need to explain that if he’d survived 2M’s men, I’d be the one to kill him. If he ratted me out, assuming he’d have the chance to do so, I’d hunt him down. -> I didn’t need to explain that if he’d survived the 2M’s men and ratted me out, I’d hunt him down. (Later on Erind says she hopes he survives so it doesn't make sense for her to convey that she wants to kill him if only he survives the 2M's). 2Ms’ men shouted more -> The 2Ms’ men shouted more. The hero wannabe started their attack. -> The hero wannabes started their attack. ----- When I was a little kid, my family jumped all over islands in the Pacific, from Hawaii to Guam, and even to the Philippines. -> Since WWII happened differently in this timeline, is the Philippines its own country, or is it still part of the US? Because the Philippines only became an independent country after WWII in 1946. Maybe this could be an interesting point of divergence. It made me want to ask Mom to buy me a car just to decorate the interior. -> She can ask Deen for a car. No, I should have a separate name for this body—Red Hood was the persona I had presented to the Marsh Row people. -> I wonder when she'll call herself Blanchette. It was amazing to have the point of view of the monster picking off people. Usually, the movie would have the camera following the targets to capture their fear. -> It's like power fantasy in a horror genre. And if Erind's treating herself like a camera, imagine later if Erind uses Blanchette after putting on Pino or Domino. Erind's main body will be Blanchette and you'll have the separate Pino or Domino body. It'll be like Erind can be both the POV of one of the humans and the POV of the monsters. Also, I was laughing in my mind at the ants scampering on the ground, continuing to search for me and their missing friend. -> Interesting that she's thinking of them as ants even though Erind is the same size as them. Although I guess if she grows into the giant werewolf than it could be analogous. I remember in the old version Erind experimented on insects when she was younger and made her mom upset. And thus, she stopped. Now, humans would be like insects to her. Perhaps Erind can make that connection. I gradually grew stronger. -> What if Blanchette gains a six pack in addition to a tail to match Myra lol? And then we can have the 3B's (Erind, Deen, and Myra) all have six packs. I've always wondered how the rest of Blanchette's muscles work. Do her biceps, thighs, calves, forearms, and abs get stronger / bigger? Or does she only get bigger along with her claws? I thought I'd minimize the feral mind for now and leave the heavy negative effects for when she transforms more. -> It'll be fun to see how this goes. Maybe if Erind injured pretty badly, her Core awakens her powers painfully, allowing Erind to get out of the feral state. The docks will be the first serious fight she'd be in where there's a real chance of dying. -> Interesting to see what changes will be here. In the last version we only saw outside POVs of the werewolf and she basically seemed unstoppable. Perhaps there will be more Adumbrae here or stronger defenses. And then Erind has to wrestle over her feral mind to make more strategic decisions. I think there was only a gunship last time that fired missiles. Also, in a few months, I plan to start another story with a female main character who's also villainous. Something you’ll likely enjoy, though it will have light litrpg elements to draw in more RR/SH readers. It'll be added to the tiers, so that's more benefits to you. -> Cool! I'll make sure to check it out. I don't mind some litrpg as long as it doesn't become like a textbook. Hopefully, this'll be first person POV as well. It makes it easier to get into the MC's head. Thanks for the chapter!

Vaporus

Excellent writing, good stuff!


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