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[REND] 19.1 - Blonde and Dangerous

🕑 Added 2025-08-13 13:15:20 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

- Good point on Deen suspecting Erind for the family excuse. - The needle is stronger to stab superhumans, just need superstrength. Not sure if this would pierce Erind though. - Ooo, I didn't know that history of buff.

Karp Paul

Erind was fine—she had mentioned she’d be busy after her role at Eve. Something about meeting her cousin. - Like, who would be meeting their cousin right after setting off an explosion? While her best friend is on a dangerous mission. Is family so important for Erind, that she cannot just skip one meeting? Or, maybe she is doing it to get herself and alibi? Also, I don't remember Erind actually talking about her famility at all... - this is something Deen could be thinking, slowly wounding up. Then she stabbed the massive needle into her neck. - How? Isn't their skin really tough? “Buff?” Deen asked. “Ah, sorry. I was talking like it’s some computer game..." - The word "buff" is not really new, and is used outside gamer slang.

Vaporus

Excellent writing, good stuff!

Temple (REND)

- Deen would probably worry about Erind's part of the mission after this. I'm thinking we can have an aftermath chapter that leads to Spooky Erind showing up as an epilogue. - Boosters here will be more scarce. In the prior cycle, I did plan for team missions, but we went into a different direction. The artificial Corebrings of the secret org won't be that strong. But I think we'll eventually meet more of them, plus the org itself. Probably after Red Island. - Well, Erind needs to have her "Core power" first before she tries a booster. And also needs another big mission for the Professor to supply. I'm actually thinking to reverse the condo and Eve thing. Not sure. - Yep, the tiers are BID made. More like just how to respond. - ExD is progressing quite slowly. Still figuring out how Myra will be included lol. - Deen will end up craziest of them all! Hahaha - Thanks for sharing your thoughts and the help proofreading!

OmniHumanist

Typos: It buffs everything superhuman aspects of our body. -> It buffs all superhuman aspects of our body. “I hope you can look further into the future to keep us safer. I’m just going to say thank you for accompanying us on this mission. -> “I hope you can look further into the future to keep us safer. I’m just going to say thank you for accompanying us on this mission." Tier Threes would require BID special agents to handle, while Tier Fours could bend reality that bullets couldn’t even shoot straight—those would need reality stabilizers… or the help of Corebrings. -> Tier Threes would require BID special agents to handle, while Tier Fours could bend reality such that bullets couldn’t even shoot straight—those would need reality stabilizers… or the help of Corebrings. ----- But if the button didn’t work, Erind might sneak to the car and try to fix the bomb. Would she do that? Deen just knew Erind would get herself into trouble! -> Perhaps Erind can tease Deen about this later lol. Something about meeting her cousin. -> Now I'm imaging Blanchette as Erind's cousin. Deen recalled a conversation that this booster liquid was so precious that they rarely got it from the Professor, which meant that the last syringe wasn’t a spare. -> I remember in the old version that Myra revealed to Erind in arc 4 that the Professor kept handing out suppressors 'like they were free candy'. It'll be interesting to see if that persists here with the booster. It's already fun to see the whole group involved instead of basically being entirely reactive except for arc 2 in the last version. Even in arc 6, they really couldn't participate in the Red Island fight. Maybe the Professor will make stronger boosters. They might even come in handy if the secret organization wants to match up against Titans/Kreggans or even Purple Blooms. Maybe they want to face the Corebring Hive too. I don't know if you've planned past Red Island this time yet, but this might be something worth thinking about. Maybe you can tie this in on how Corebrings become Overseers as well. It was less painful than she expected, even if the needle sank more than an inch into her skin. What a tough needle. Pressing the plunger, she felt a warmness coating her neck. This warmth spread throughout her body, as if she had drunk hot coffee while being out in the cold for too long. It was very comforting. -> It'd be funny if Erind got more pain from the booster since she's part Adumbrae, and then she has to hide it. And it'd be fun to see what boost Erind will get too. Though I'll imagine it will be a while until she'll get one. Maybe Dario can give them a spare post Condo? Since the Professor might be concerned about their safety after the 2M's start deliberately targeting them with strong Adumbrae. Deen didn’t know what had improved with her power, but she began to feel safer. The knotted muscles in her back relaxed. This booster was supposed to last for half an hour, according to Dario, during their planning. They should be fleeing by the time it’d run out. -> Lol, what if Dario just gave Deen an anxiolytic? Anyways, it'll be fun to see what improvement Deen gets. With Gabe by her side, she might be able to defeat a Tier Two, an Adumbrae that was strong enough that a ComExo needed to be called. The Adumbrae Threat Tier levels were based on the response needed. Tier Threes would require BID special agents to handle, while Tier Fours could bend reality that bullets couldn’t even shoot straight—those would need reality stabilizers… or the help of Corebrings. -> Fun to learn more about Adumbrae tiers. This one is made by the BID right? It'll be interesting to see if other countries have their own tiers. As Myra walked to the warehouse entrance to partially close the roll-up door, she left behind tiny holes as parts of the concrete floor joined her armor. Spikes grew out of her back, lengthening and wriggling. They were the tentacles she wanted to make. -> Clearly this Myra would be a great candidate for Erind's harem (or a polycule between Erind and Deen). She can make Erind and Deen feel great at the same time with her tentacles. It's sort of refreshing to have Deen's view while setting up her character development for the future. -> Deen is like the only one with a moral core lol. Everyone else just wants to beat everyone up. And we'll get to see Deen's gradual moral decline lol. Thanks for the chapter! Also, hyped for the bonus tomorrow!


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