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[REND] 19.2 - Blonde and Dangerous

🕑 Added 2025-08-15 04:21:00 +0000 UTC

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Karp Paul

Ambriel—still looks like a robber despite wearing that uniform. - She should be swamped in that uniform.

Vaporus

Excellent writing, good stuff!

Temple (REND)

Yep, Deen will eventually be a badass once she gets used to this new world. She'll go through character development. Erind's Core power will be a buff to her Adumbrae power for now, and also a restriction.

Daniel McConville

Fuck yeah go Deen. Loving the hints of what Gabe can become. Really loving leader Deen too, because we are in Erind's PoV all the time its hard to remember that Deen is this girlboss alpha lawyer in training. Still very VERY curios to know what Erind's Core will do and how it will affect/interact with her other powers.

Temple (REND)

- Yeah, Penthero was asleep. - Lol, Deen still doesn't know about ExD - Erind might try throwing vehicles someday haha - Yeah, Deen's too powerful. She can only be defeated if she intentionally makes the wrong choice. - Deen and Erind can trade secrets XD - My original plan for Gabe was to be insanely huge summoned creature for Deen. - Thanks for sharing your thoughts and the help proofreading!

Temple (REND)

Thanks for the help! It's the speed of writing that's the main problem. And I'm focused on the deadlines, so it gets overlooked. But I do reread them when I have time. Like in the previous chapters, there were still other codenames there that weren't caught. In the prior cycle, it worked that way as you suggested. But I changed it in this version. My rationale is that the person would still think the real names in their head. Anyway, it's not often chapters like these show up. Gabe could obtain info from possibilities. Its sharing it with Deen in the boosted form. So it's really OP. But this only triggers in dangerous situations. It depends if there'll be a situation where Erind's secret would be revealed by Gabe.

Temple (REND)

Thanks for the support!

No Name

“Are they going to Myra’s place?” -> Merge “Myra’s starting things off with a bang!” -> Merge “Reo, summon Blubber,” said Deen -> Oberon “Fine, Deen’s the boss of us, I guess.” -> Ambriel “Leave that large man to Myra.” -> Merge You really aren't good at keeping these straight... Maybe try to stick to just one or the other at one time? In other words, while in codename mode, the POV also uses the codenames in internal dialogue. Also, if Deen can now "see" the possible futures as well, it effectively becomes a power that would let her obtain information from these possibilities, even if she never acts on them. In other news, Domino has been found dead in a ditch. Cause of death appears to be suicide, with the suicide note reading "My life is now worthless". Is this how Deen finds out about Erinds adumbrae side this time around?

OmniHumanist

Typos: She got really strong! -> She's gotten really strong! “Reo, summon Blubber,” said Deen -> “Reo, summon Blubber,” said Deen. ----- This adds to the advanced chapters on Patreon. I wasn’t able to release it yesterday because something came up that ate my writing time. We still have one regular chapter left for this week, which may be delayed by about half a day from its usual schedule. -> No worries! Maybe this delay will help me against Penthero. “I’m just thinking how to up our chances of survival,” Deen said, blushing. -> Nooo!!! Deen you are only supposed to blush for Erind! Deen looked over their cover just in time to see a large object flying in the air—it was the UPN truck! Did Myra throw that? -> I remember in the last version Myra threw a police car at the police when they were escaping from Stella in arc 3. Maybe this is something Myra just likes doing. Perhaps Erind could get into to it to lol. But it wasn’t simple words, this time. It was an idea accompanied by rippling images in Deen’s head. She was seeing the future now. -> Deen's upgrade has been revealed! And she's even more OP now. It's funny since she could have been a main character too in an OP MC story. Here she is beating up all the baddies with her OP power. Deen also wondered whether she should tell Erind or not about her boosted power. Erind was the only person she could trust right now, but Deen might need to keep some secrets to herself. Erind wouldn’t knowingly betray her, but she might accidentally slip up and reveal this most important secret to others. -> Oh, the Irony! If only Deen knew the secrets Erind was hiding. Now, in this rewrite, we're seeing that Deen's power has huge potential if it keeps growing. Who knows what it'll be like once Gabe is fully grown? -> Maybe it could merge with Deen, growing her in size and giving her flight powers. And then she can truly be like an angel. Maybe even an archangel. She'd be like a nerfed version of the Simurgh from Worm lol. Thanks for the chapter!

TheHornedOne

Tftc


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