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[REND] 20.2 - Big Bad Wolf to the Rescue

🕑 Added 2025-08-18 14:44:49 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

Thanks for the help! It's a weird cutoff thing of Patreon. I think I've fixed it. I'll also go over your edit suggestions after I finish writing the chapter for today.

Karp Paul

The sharp-smelling liqu - Unfinished sentence.

Temple (REND)

It's a buffet!

NeoJungleLover

So many snacks >:)

Vaporus

Excellent writing, good stuff!

Temple (REND)

- Maybe REND will be a movie someday haha. Also, I think Myra is straight here. She might be attracted to the strength. - If going child-sized, we can have a Hansel and Gretel mask. - Hmmm... Discord instead of Domino for a name? - Erind can probably start by claiming the physical changes are due to the Core, and see how Deen would react. - I was actually wondering if Pino reading minds was too much. - Funnily enough, taur isn't a suffic or anything. Centaur itself is the word that came from something else. But the taur in minotaur is bull. - It's probably fine that Everett shouted that since he's in desperate mode here. - Yep, Erind is more reckless this time, but also smarter too. - Thanks for sharing your thoughts and helping proofread!

Temple (REND)

Need to make Deen obsessed with her first hahaha.

Temple (REND)

In the original version, Deen also gave the name. But I think Deen already knew then the name Blanchette from little red riding hood.

Temple (REND)

Glad that it makes you happy!

Temple (REND)

Thank you very much for supporting :D

Temple (REND)

Thanks so much for your support!

Daniel McConville

Thanks for the chapter! Makes my day when a new one is out. :)

Dolus

TFTC!!!

Wensber

Thanks for the chapter!

OmniHumanist

Typos: Fuck her for describing me as a ‘short’ though, even if it was true. -> Fuck her for describing me as ‘short’ though, even if it was true. But this wasn’t about causing chaos, because I could—just partly that. -> But this wasn’t about causing chaos, because I could—just partly do that. ----- It also exuded the scent of fear. Such a sweet scent that made me giddy. All prey had that when they were about to die. -> Yummy fearful prey. Movie trailer? I regained control of my senses. Tentacle Pile was weakened, and I had gotten much stronger during that eating session. I was in my sort-of-furry-Amazon-warrior stage. All my injuries had mostly healed. -> Imagine if REND was a movie. Also, do you think Myra is attracted to Blanchette lol? Fuck her for describing me as a ‘short’ though, even if it was true -> Imagine if Erind's Core mask also made her short, like child sized lol. And everyone keeps calling her short. Now Erind can be even more upset. Either that, or it can make her look like her Mom and have her grow to that height. So like how parents enforce Rules on children, Erind is enforcing Rules on everyone else. And then Erind has more reasons to leave her base form since she's taller than Deen lol. If I picked the correct dialogue options, I might cause a rift in their group. -> Erind causing discord in the group! Wait a minute, if Erind gets a Rules mask, she can call herself Discord since her Rules will mess up everyone. She's sowing discord! And then you can advertise the discord server! And what would Deen think about the wolf Adumbrae? We could have our own conversation about what happened. Would it be a good idea to reveal to Deen that it was me who saved us all along? That I was an Adumbrae? -> A good time to reveal is when Erind's physical changes get to be too much, so she needs Deen's help. Hopefully, Erind would have crafted a strong relationship with Deen so she'd be willing to help Erind out even though she's an Adumbrae. Another idea is that if Pino can continue to read thoughts like in the last version, Erind can use that as a litmus test to see if it's okay to allow Deen to know she's an Adumbrae. I love sugar. -> This is an incredible use of Blanchette. What does ‘taur’ mean? -> Pretty sure it means bull. “Deen, run!” Everett shouted. “I can’t control—argh!” His body convulsed. -> Everett, you're exposing Deen's real name! Things are different now, and she's exercising better control and understanding of her powers this time around. -> Erind is way more combat aware this time! A lot of smart uses for powers. Thanks for the chapter!

TheHornedOne

Lol, Erind’s getting her name from Deen now. Should have been quicker on the draw.

KanadianKitsune

Would it be a good idea to reveal to Deen that it was me who saved us all along? That I was an Adumbrae? -> Do, it! Do, it! Do, it! (no comment on whether or not it's a good idea)


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