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[REND] 20.3 - Big Bad Wolf to the Rescue

🕑 Added 2025-08-20 13:42:43 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

Thanks for the suggestion! I edited the line. And yep, we're going to have some conflict in the group because of this.

Karp Paul

Tentacle Pile, and now, this? Why did most of the 2Ms’ Adumbrae goons have yucky, uncool powers? Wouldn’t be surprising if Clay Coward had a disgusting transformation, too. - You can add smth like "Why won't they transform into a pizza? Or a steak, at least! So annoying." “She saved you! She killed… she ate the Adumbrae who controlled your body.” Deen stood up and gently pushed Everett aside. “Let me talk to her. Look after Reo.” - That could be a really cool twist. The rest of the group now will have the impression that Blanchette eats Adumbrae and does not really attack anybody else. Then, why did she attack Dario? Maybe he actually is an Adumbrae! That is why she wanted to eat him! - This line of thinking can really cause a rift in the group.

Temple (REND)

The finale, plus some more chapters until the end haha.

NeoJungleLover

Time for finale!

Vaporus

Excellent writing, good stuff!

Temple (REND)

- Oh, that's right. Vanessa's powers are kind of yucky too. - Hey, Napoleon wasn't short haha - The Time I Became a Werewolf Litrpg - Gabe also has schemes of its own. - I just love Mr. Ogre haha - Thanks for the help proofreading and sharing your thoughts!

Temple (REND)

Oh, it's been awhile since I watched that.

Temple (REND)

They just love to hop, lol. Thanks for spotting the error!

Temple (REND)

We'll eventually see the werewolf on the cover, lol. After such a long time.

Waifu-glasses

WolfErind

KanadianKitsune

They’ve also done their hopping like me. -> They’ve also done their *s*hopping like me.

ARIMA Maroon

Typos: Gritting his teeth, Elian didn’t hesitate to excise the parasite Adumbrae’s body, even if it had merged with his own, muscles and veins and all. -> Gritting his teeth, Everett didn’t hesitate to excise the parasite Adumbrae’s body, even if it had merged with his own, muscles and veins and all. “At last, we’ve successfully rounded you up, Adumbrae bandits!” blared an ominous voice in the PA system. -> “At last, we’ve successfully rounded you up, Adumbrae bandits!” blared an ominous voice from the PA system. ----- Tentacle Pile, and now, this? Why did most of the 2Ms’ Adumbrae goons have yucky, uncool powers? Wouldn’t be surprising if Clay Coward had a disgusting transformation, too. -> Vanessa has a yucky cool power. I walked towards them, maintaining eye contact with Deen. I’m looking down on Deen! This was our natural height! Well, unnatural, for me. Still, I never imagined this day would come. It was a whole new world up here, being tall. -> Erind's found a solution to her Napolean complex! I wanted something intimidating, like Omega Werewolf Lord the Destroyer of Galaxies. -> Erind should come up with light novel titles. I just realized that her Guardian Angel pulled a fast one on me! It lured me into committing to this heroic Blanchette face, and now I should put my life on the line to buy time. -> It's awesome seeing Deen unintentionally force Blanchette into helping them. It didn’t have hands. Or perhaps it did before, but they were replaced with brutish metallic contraptions that appeared to be a cross between a heavy machine gun, or even a cannon, and a bludgeoning mace with dozens of spikes jutting out in odd directions. Our colossal opponent raised one of its gun-mace-whatever-fist above its head and bellowed so loud I could feel the sound. -> Hey look, this guy moved from arc 2 to arc 1 this time! Thanks for the chapter!

InLucidReverie

Floaty feeling thing remimds me of the expanse, when aliens just turn off consciousness


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