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[Smite Happens] 10 - In the Company of Sentinels

🕑 Added 2025-10-05 10:07:48 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

Most litrpg readers don't like the MC getting trapped. Ruins the power fantasy, I suppose. But that sentiment probably doesn't apply to opening here. Yep, you're right that it's just the start and the circumstances are different. Also, people might appreciate the different sort of start to an isekai.

Reppyxz

The opening didn’t personally bother me. I don’t really see people having a problem with it. But I’m not super in tune with what people dislike. Most of the time when I see people get mad with the agency of the main character, it’s usually when the character is losing agency. But since this is the start of the story, from the readers perspective, she isn’t losing agency, she just starts the story with no agency and that immediately gets it. So I wouldn’t expect people to react badly to that, but again I don’t know.

dimi1010

She got herself an unskippable opening cutscene before the RPG story. I personally found that unique. I also had a chuckle by comparing how Erind goes to setup all her movie like scenarios, and here we have Emery getting divine handouts doing all the work for her.

Beeees!

The opening part where she can't move really reminded me of skyrim opening lol. Seems fine to me, a little preview into what happens and to give reason for her to arrive


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