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[REND] B2. 1.3 - Home Sweet Aloneness Again

🕑 Added 2025-09-10 14:53:24 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

- Erind wasn't really thinking about the height when first seeing herself. And that was more of a comment at the reflection, not that she was entirely oblivious to the height difference. - The dialogue reflects Deen thinking that she and Erind are very close. That supports Deen's other actions that only fit really close friends.

Karp Paul

“Oh, I’m taller.” Standing beside my real body, I estimated I had a good half a foot over it. - That should have been obvious from the start, shouldn't it? “It’s about something that I have that you don’t.” “There’s a lot of things that you—” “It’s to accentuate the shape of my butt. But you wouldn’t know anything about that.” - This exchange sounds toxic. This kind of camaraderie requires them to be really close.

Temple (REND)

- ragdoll Erind - Yep, that's probably the reason why they're all taller. - Oh, that's a cool idea. Will add a source of drama to Pino power. I'll note that. - Erind will eventually experiment more with Pino. Though I haven't settled yet on the buffs. - We'll stretch the sea-ocean thing throughout the whole series lol. - Erind couldn't have a career in pest control. - The Secret Service will find it easy to cover Erind lol. - Erind may be libertarian or so, but she'll advocate for dictatorship if she's the presidet lol. Thanks for sharing your thoughts!

ARIMA Maroon

My real body rolled off the bed and dropped on the floor in a heap. -> That's a mood. Were all my transformations going to be taller than my original self? This wouldn’t be the last mask from Spooky Erind, I bet. She must be messing with me. -> Wouldn't Erind want to be taller though? Possible that I could control other people, too. Would fit the theme of puppeteering others, with the strings and all. But I needed others as test subjects for that. Deen? -> It'll be fun to see Deen react to Pino and Puppet Erind. Maybe the buffs that Pino is can be addicting, causing others to want Erind to use Pino lol. And Deen ends up getting addicted to Pino's powerups, which would be a huge turnaround compared to the last version where she wanted to destroy Pino in arc 5. “Cables. That’s what I was thinking of,” I muttered, holding up the end of one strand. And these thin wires at the end looked like the wiring inside cables that was protected by layers of plastic and whatever. -> What if Erind tried connecting herself to other wires lol? That information wouldn’t help me distinguish a body of water I was looking at. “Is there anything that’s more—? -> Maybe if Blanchette grows to the size of a city in the far future, Erind will be able to tell the difference. “There you are,” Deen said in a tone reminiscent of my mother when she was angry at little kid me setting fire to an anthill. “Why didn’t you wait for me to pick you up at your condo?” -> I'm imagining Erind just stealing lighters now. And Erind's mom coming up with more secure ways to make sure Erind doesn't get them, but Erind always finds a way. And then Lenida scolds Erind, but Erind just says she's freeing society of ants. If you were the President of the United States, what would you do?” -> Flatter them and add Corebrings to the military industrial complex. Also, imagine if Erind became president lol. The cutest president ever! We're setting up things in this chapter, and we'll have a class chapter next. -> In which Erind pretends to be a fan of American Nationalism to answer the question. Although, I imagine Erind in actuality leans closer to libertarianism since she's a big fan of privacy. And then you have Deen, who had an environmental law elective in the last version. So she leans more towards that. And ExD Erind and Deen are pro-LGBT. Fun to think of what characters believe in and where they lean. Although, Erind doesn't really believe in much. Thanks for the chapter!


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