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[REND] B2. 8.2 - The Gangster and the Sister

🕑 Added 2025-11-12 12:14:41 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

- Maybe Erind isn't the main characters so she can't sense if she's being followed. - The telekinesis was based off her hand. Before, Kelsey could just mold a huge construct like Green Lantern. She seems to be able to do so now. - Better just don't give anything to Dario, lol - Could also be why the Adumbrae-Kelsey talked with Erind first, because she felt weird - Kelsey is a partial scaley though - Yep, that's around what Erind will pretend to be, experimented on by the PCM. - I'm writing the next chapter now! - Thanks for sharing your thoughts and the help proofreading!

Temple (REND)

Kelsey will be there, a tiny part of here, but it's the Adumbrae mostly in control in this case. And Erind has no idea what's going on in the Adumbrae's mind.

Temple (REND)

Maybe that's a legal requirement to be hot for Adumbrae lol. Yep, we'll have a Kelsey POV chapter. I think the next, next one.

Temple (REND)

Thanks for your support!

Temple (REND)

Spooky Erind certainly is dramatic.

Critical Bum

I just realized that spooky Erind might be acting mysterious and vague because she thinks it's cool. Nothing to hide, just being a pain to figure out for the sake of it.

ARIMA Maroon

Typos: The rationale for Rule#10 was that getting inebriated could ruin the face I wore. -> The rationale for Rule #10 was that getting inebriated could ruin the face I wore. --- That was a cheesy trope, like the main character sensing that they were being followed. But I was sure that there was an Adumbrae here, the same Adumbrae that escaped from the tunnels because of me. -> Alas, it appears that this trope was not true for Erind. If this were Kelsey, she must’ve gotten fucking huge to grab whole bodies. -> Or she could have used her telekinesis. Should I give some pills to Dario to pass to the Professor, or keep them a secret? Would any of my gangster minions know a scientist who could analyze these pills? -> Probably shouldn't give them to Dario otherwise he would question where you got them. The Adumbrae in this building might not be so willing to tell me anything, especially given that I had an artificial Core. What would the Adumbrae make of that? -> This could explain why Erind was unaffected by the machine. Perhaps Erind could say she's an Adumbrae-Corebring hybrid that was experimented on by the PCM. And then they can both bond over being experiments and being trapped by the PCM. Horns? I want horns too! It pained me to concede that this Adumbrae looked more badass than Blanchette. Hotter, too. Kind of like a succubus demon. -> Sounds like a good addition to Erind's harem of super powered girls! Or maybe a polycule, although I guess Erind will want to keep her away from Myra. On the hotness side, it doesn't sound like she has a six pack. Blanchette can grow to have a six pack so Blanchette is hotter than Kelsey. Was it because I was in control of my body, not Spooky Erind? -> I think its more that you don't have superpowered smell. Perhaps Blanchette would be able to tell. “And why did you save me?” Kelsey asked. -> Because you're hot. Jkjk. If you go with Erind saying that she's an Adumbrae-Corebring hybrid experiment of the PCM, then that could be a really good reason. Just kidding. If I'm not mistaken, not counting Spooky Erind, this is the first conversation with an Adumbrae (the otherworldly entity, not the human) that has been shown on REND. -> Hyped to see more of this Adumbrae and how she acts next chapter. Thanks for the chapter!

Critical Bum

This feels a lot more dangerous with the adumbrea in control. Like she might attack randomly. Most of our theories held the assumption that the human would be in control and desperate for help too. They might still be willing to be friends though.

Marquess

Damn, Kelsey’s description is straight out of a Vitaly Alexius fic. Are all smart adumbrae hot? I’m so curious about what Kelsey thinks of all this. Captured, escaped, and now an unknown comes and says hi. Temple, I beg you, giver her a POV chapter!

Vaporus

Excellent writing, good stuff!


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