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[REND] B2. 10.1 - Monsters Make Friends

🕑 Added 2025-11-20 11:43:11 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

I'm still really not sure if Keke will be a "good" Adumbrae. Maybe not really in a way. It's like they say that the devil won't how up with horns and tail and wings. An Adumbrae wouldn't be all monster mode to take over someone's body. Probably way easier to "make friends" first. At this point, yeah Keke's option to stay longer is to act good, whether she actually is or not.

No Name

Hmm... So surprisingly, Kelsey and Keke actually seem to get along. It would be interesting if Pino could manage to drag Kelsey back in control: The way these two act, it may be one of the seemingly rare cases where they would be interested in an arrangement where they could pass control of the body back and forth, but Keke simply lacks the ability to do so... It would make Kelsey a rather unique character in the story, no? In all other cases we are aware of, either the human or the adum "wins" control... Regardless of whether Keke is truthful, or simply scheming, Kelsey has already proven that she trusts Keke and is willing to surrender control of her body. Even if Keke surrenders control back, Kelsey would likely be fine with a switching arrangement. Being able to return to human form to blend in and hide would also be useful for Keke; Keke is obviously smart enough to know when to make sacrifices (i.e. loosing complete control of the body) for long-term goals (more fun times on earth).

Temple (REND)

- Yeah, I thought to make Kelsey and the Adumbrae friends. That said, we don't really know if the Adumbrae is good. I haven't decided yet. Maybe Keke was just scheming long term. - I'm still thinking if we can return Kelsey to human. Probably not fully? - Keke and Kelsey will have their own plans against Erind probably. - The torturing eating kind hahaha - Thanks for the help proofreading and sharing your thoughts!

Temple (REND)

Kelsey wasn't truthful to Myra. Nonetheless, Kelsey really was trying to stop the takeover until she resigned to it. She says it took her some time to make peace. And she hadn't actually made peace with it.

Temple (REND)

Thank you for your support! I like the way I took this plotline.

Temple (REND)

It will be much easier to chill with Kelsey and Keke, if they do make friends.

Temple (REND)

They can actually turn this around Erind too. As far as Erind thinks, Keke is a "bad" Adumbrae.

Temple (REND)

Thanks as always for the support!

Critical Bum

In a previous chap myra said kelsey avoided using her power to prevent keke from gaining more control. This chapter seems to contradict that somewhat but maybe it can be explained as kelsey feeling guilty about befriending keke and trying to avoid using her power around Myra

ARIMA Maroon

Typos: They were hunted down by a strong foe. -> They were being hunted down by a strong foe. ----- How much time had passed since Kelsey had completely surrendered her body? -> Such a wild change from the last version lol, where Kelsey told the Adumbrae to get out of her body and then jumped out of a window. Didn’t she deserve to enjoy these moments after what they’ve been through? Didn’t she have the right to be like other normal people? -> Don't worry, Erind will give her that right! Or at least the right to enjoy moments. Not sure if Erind can make her look like a normal human. “This is proof of my sincerity,” said the woman. “A bit weird to be talking about sincerity after eating parts of you, but that’s it.” -> Not sure why Erind needs to show sincerity? Erind's not trying to impress Keke or anything. “I will talk… with Kelsey. Not you.” -> Hyped to see how this goes! Although, I imagine Erind will be forced to talk to both of them. What would Kelsey think of Erind eating her body? -> I'm sure Kelsey will enjoy it as much as Deen does in ExD. Wait. What kind of eating were we talking about? Thanks for the chapter!

Blake

Very interesting chapter, I'm happy to see another Adumbrae/host duo. Thanks for your hard work and the extra chapters lately!

Critical Bum

Would be interesting if Erind actually likes hanging out with them compared to Dean. Whatever mask she makes would be closer to the truth.

Marquess

Kelsey POV has arrived! I can’t wait to see how this goes. Both Kelsey (and Keke?) are going to be so damn confused after all this.

Vaporus

Excellent writing, good stuff!


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