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[REND] B2. 10.4 - Monsters Make Friends

🕑 Added 2025-11-25 12:10:17 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

We're going to have it in the future. Probably sort of merge it with the Vegas arc. I don't want it to happen now because it's a pretty huge event that changed a lot of things in the city. But I really like the condo arc too, despite its problems.

민설

I wonder if you're gonna have another sec 3? Like the condo stuff? Was kinda my favourite arc or the one I was the most engaged in at the time Great chapter though

Temple (REND)

I'll think about armor regeneration for Pino. But so far, she's tough enough to survive the current level of opponents. As for the other thing, you mean that the hero wannabes will work with Erind to make it seem that Pino and Erind are different people? That might work as a plot point against specific opponents or in specific cases, but I'm not sure why they'll do it unless they want to trick people. If in a fight, they'll just keep the Erind body and Pino body in the backlines.

Temple (REND)

- Twisting necks is also fun haha. - Maybe Erind should be a chiropractor assassin - Yeah, having the artificial Core is great - When I decided to add the artificial Core, I never thought of this exorcism route. I only thought of this in Book 2 to have more use for Pino. But the possibilities are huge storywise. We can do a lot with this new development. It leads the story into a new potential direction. - Yep, we'll see how ExK goes lol - Thanks for the help proofreading and sharing your thoughts!

Temple (REND)

As always, thanks for the support!

Temple (REND)

Erind can make that pun next time haha.

ARIMA Maroon

Typos: It was probably like when the Core halted by an uncontrolled growth spurt at the docks. -> It was probably like when the Core halted my uncontrolled growth spurt at the docks. Overdrove saluted. “Got it, boss!” -> Overdrive saluted. “Got it, boss!” ----- I could have transformed into a giant werewolf and eaten people, but I still wanted to return to my roots. -> But eating people is fun! Instead of making his head face backward, I rotated it so that his chin was near where his ear used to be. A clean and quick death imparted by the benevolent Red Hood. I should contrast myself with Overdrive, who made people suffer. The lesser evil was the actual monster in this case. -> Well, Erind is returning to her hobby from the last version, snapping people's necks! Technically, it was the artificial Core that did something to Kelsey. -> And technically, it's part of you. I wrapped her for takeout and came up to her. -> A Kelsey burrito. Would this work with other Adumbrae? Could I save them? Was I the actual… fucking cure? I should be! I always knew that I was main character material. -> And this is why Erind accepting the Core is such a great decision! You have so many cool new plot threads and powers with it. And Erind has an “exorcism” skill of sorts, making Pino very much in demand. -> It would be fun to see Penemue's and Hedley Kow's reaction to it. I know you said you might retcon them being able to control themselves, but I kind of liked having the other Adumbrae group that could control themselves, and how they secretly worked for the Corebrings. And it could lead to other conflicts later as Erind is pushing that she can give Adumbrae a cure. And it also gives something for Erind to strive for herself since she wants to be able to control her own body. Keeps things open. We'll have Erind and Kelsey in the next chapter. -> Hyped to see Erind add another girl to her harem/polycule! Thanks for the chapter!

Dolus

TFTC! I feel like there was a missed opportunity to say "turn heads" instead of "twist necks"

Vaporus

Excellent writing, good stuff!

No Name

Say, Temple, have you decided whether Pino possess anything like the armor generation ability this time around? If she does, have you considered having Erind making the Core group pose as if Pino and Erind are different members of the group entirely? Have Erind exclusively use one buff for her own body (or it could be exclusive to her own body in the first place), to spoof a different ability. It would require some effort from Erind in learning to puppet herself accurately enough that no-one would suspect anything, but it would be a useful deception.


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