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[REND] B2. 6.2 - Monster in the Labyrinth

🕑 Added 2025-10-23 13:35:22 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

- Maybe Erind needs to work on abs, lol. - PG 13 with body horror? - The other characters wrong assumptions just make things better. - It'll depend if Kelsey can still think like a human. - Thanks for sharing your thoughts and help proofreading!

ARIMA Maroon

Typos: I appreciate the diverse villains showing up in my movie. -> I appreciated the diverse villains showing up in my movie. ----- A bare midriff look wasn’t my style, but whatever. -> It is Blanchette's style though. Eww, the convulsing person below me was naked. -> Oh no! This isn't ExD! Chuckling, she said, “I know. You’re Adumbrae as well. Red Hood sent you!” -> dundundun! . I think these three will have interesting dynamics, especially when we find Kelsey. -> It'd be fun to see Erind and Deen trying to justify not killing Kelsey even though she's probably progressed as an Adumbrae. Thanks for the chapter!

Temple (REND)

Oh, those are normal people. They're getting sacrificed (we don't really know what the PCM is doing) to the Adumbrae. Deen wanted to stop whatever was happening to the regular humans. And I'll edit that part where Erind mentioned Deen's name while near the scientist. The other one was just mumbling. Thanks!

Reppyxz

Maybe I misunderstood but why does Dean care about these people? Aren’t all these people Adumbrae? I don’t think she would care to save them. I would think Adumbrae are inherently unable to be innocent in Dean‘s eyes, or at least, as of right now. Did Erind mean to say dean’s name out loud in front of the scientist? I imagine so, but I thought I would point it out anyways. Thanks for the chapter. I’m really excited to see where this continues to go, can’t wait to get some answers!


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