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[REND] B2. 6.4 - Monster in the Labyrinth

🕑 Added 2025-10-27 13:18:09 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

Erind's story for her face is that she's scared but also wants to make up for not joining the docks fight. I suppose make herself have guilty feelings and do on. I'd say that yes, Erind may be a bit of a compulsive liar. I think right now there's a debate whether pathological lying is a distinct disorder or a symptom of other disorders (which Erind definitely has). Perhaps it's her twisted way of asserting control over a situation, making something about her. A simple lie will just be that. But if she lies to make things more complicated, she controls the situation to her mind. Perhaps we can explore this in the future.

No Name

Sure, let’s go with that, I thought, meekly nodding. “If I told Dario about my powers, I would be forced to join missions. But I’ll be fighting now just the same.” -> This is one of those instances that makes me wonder why Erind chooses to lie so flagrantly... Some times, like here, she chooses a complete lie even when it is explicitly a bad idea, and there is a better option immediately available. Just telling the truth with a few adjustments seems a lot more clever in this instance. For one, if Erind was so scared of fights she would hide her ability from even Deen, would she have come along on this little field trip so readily in the first place? Second, Deen is supposed to be the one person completely on Erinds side; it's not a good idea for Erind to admit to keeping critical secrets from her. Why lie when the truth with some slight adjustment is a much better excuse? Erind has limited idea what Pino actually does at this point, it's not to a state where it would not be of practical use. If she claimed she wanted to figure out what it actually did before showing it off to Deen first, it would make perfect sense. Erind has years of experience with making stuff up and keeping stories straight, but instances like these make it seem like she really doesn't know when and how to lie... She comes off as closer to a compulsive liar instead, lying just for the sake of lying, without rhyme or reason.

Vaporus

Excellent writing, good stuff!


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