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[REND] B2. 7.1 - Slippery Sisterly Sightings

🕑 Added 2025-10-31 12:46:54 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

Oh, Corebring Hive!

Umbra_Nex

Ooh cool. Makes me think of the Borg Queen xD

Temple (REND)

Ooo, that's cool. Hmmm. Maybe I should just change it to no sound at all.

No Name

"The sound was subdued, more like hardened plastic than metallic." -> Random science note: The characteristic sound of a material when you tap it originates from harmonic oscillations in the material in response to the initial perturbation. In other words, the sound originates from tiny changes in the shape of the material. If the material of Pinos body was truly impervious distortion by external force, it should make no sound upon tapping it (Apart from the sound of the object doing the tapping). In other words, if Pinos body makes sounds upon tapping, it is possible to deform, and thus, theoretically, possible to break. (Assuming materials science applies. Which it probably wouldn't.) Completely pointless tangent over.

Temple (REND)

Deen probably thinks Erind's thing is hiding behind others, like making a new body, having others fight for her, being mostly support. And Erind's control isn't really mind control because she has to fight for it. So it's understandable Deen will spin it this way. Maybe they can hide this from Dario and the rest of the hero wannabes? Parts of the power anyway. Yep, his name is Reo. It will depend on Erind how much she will let on. Erind can keep up just being the "support" of the group. Then push Deen's explanation for her power. It's going to be a fun thing. In the future, we'll create an AI Erind who'll take over the world hahahaha.

Temple (REND)

-Maybe Deen will proclaim herself in charge of the Erind body when Pino is out lol. - Yeah, we can have a dream about Erind beating up Deen hahaha. Then Spooky Erind can butt in. - We still haven't made the gasburner joke. - Like and Share through the Pino link. - Deen also grenaded Erind back then, I think? - It's going to be insane if Erind needs to vomit out Pino each time she summons haha. - I think we have a good intro of Pino here. Way better than the old version. - Thanks for sharing your thoughts and help proofreading!

Temple (REND)

Deen the Deviant. That's a good title haha.

Temple (REND)

Thanks for the support!

Temple (REND)

Cecilia probably was ready to die if they did crush her head. She just wanted to mess with them. About the discussing power thing, I wanted to show that it's just a few weeks ago that Erind and Deen were normal law students. Myra isn't really into safety and all that. The Three Bs don't really think about safety at this point. They were relieved they beat a powerful opponent and there might be some false sense of safety with Gabe back online. They are bound to make mistakes this early so they'll be better at this later. If they're suddenly all security and stuff like Dario, that'd be out of character. I want them to learn a lesson about this to make their competence later on grounded.

Marquess

Holy shit. No wonder she was so ready to die. Gambling on the three of them not crushing her head was risky, but it clearly paid off for her. On a different note, why are they all discussing PINO’s power in an enemy facility? They’re still using nicknames in case someone can overhear them, so shouldn’t they give her power the same treatment?

ARIMA Maroon

Typos: My robotic voice hid well the giggles -> My robotic voice hid the giggles well I pushed her hand away and sat back up. -> I pushed her hands away and sat back up. (I imagine Deen was holding Erind's cheeks with both hands) ----- Deen continued to search my original body for injuries, raising my shirt, moving my limbs, and groping everywhere. -> Maybe this can be a common hobby for Deen when Erind becomes Pino All I had left were memories of injuring illusion Deen. -> Maybe Erind can dream about beating up Deen. “Aw, that’s so sweet.” Deen looked up as Myra came over. -> Erind, Professional Gaslighter (or in her words, Gasburner). (Hello, Erind.) She sent images of croissants. -> That's so cool, being able to share images. She looked down at me with a face full of concern. Her blonde hair draped down like curtains. -> Looks like Erind woke up on Deen's lap way earlier than the last version. Last time, Deen discovered that Erind was an Adumbrae. “Good thing I don’t give birth to my other self or something,” I said. “I’d rather not use my powers if that’s the case.” -> Erind could pretend to be a mom lol. “No! No, no, no. That made me sound like a deviant. I meant that when you made me stronger, it felt amazing to be that powerful.” -> ExD Deen is sweating right now. Fun to see more comparisons between Pino and an Adumbrae. Thanks for the chapter!

Reppyxz

It’s funny how Dean’s interpretation of Erind “core power” is her being timid. Completely ignoring the puppeteering side of the power, i’m sure Dario (if I’m remember his name correctly?) will definitely notice the symbolism. I think Rio (I think that’s his name? I just can’t remember their names for some reason) will also probably notice the symbolism, but maybe not right away. Well, to be honest, I can see the entire group besides Dean, Maya, and fire guy? Figuring it out, but they “probably” won’t realize to what extent of a manipulator she really is. But I imagine in the back of some of their minds, they’ll have some kind of small understanding that she is a at least bit of a manipulator. Well except Dario, I imagine he will just slowly become more and more cautious of her over time. Also, I successfully was able to go into the future. sadly, your story was so popular in the future that it united human thought, via the collective consciousness, and thus turned the human species into a hive mind. so it ended up being purging from existence to restore free will, but that also means I couldn’t find a single copy of it….

KanadianKitsune

No! No, no, no. That made me sound like a deviant. -> *glances at ExD*

Vaporus

Excellent writing, good stuff!


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