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[REND] B2. 7.2 - Slippery Sisterly Sightings

🕑 Added 2025-11-03 12:10:45 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

Whoops. I'll edit that. Thanks!

matt

Myra called Hall Tower Cop instead of Erind.

Temple (REND)

- I'm not sure if workouts can affect them at this point because of their support strength. Plank while having an anvil on her back? - Everyone's an Adumbrae. Everyone's a psychopath lol. - Erind is really the OP MC! - Maybe Deen can play house with Erind in ExD. I'll write ExD when things calm down lol. - Finally, we find Kelsey. Or not. - Thanks for the help proofreading and sharing your thoughts!

Temple (REND)

If it's Kelsey, then it's a bigger worry for Myra because the BID might find the Adumbrae first.

ARIMA Maroon

Typos: It was becoming unflatteringly short now, exposing my abdomen, which no longer had well-defined cuts during my cheerleading days. -> It was becoming unflatteringly short now, exposing my abdomen, which no longer had the well-defined cuts of my cheerleading days. Or we might be overthinking all of this. -> Or we might have been overthinking all of this. ----- It was becoming unflatteringly short now, exposing my abdomen, which no longer had well-defined cuts during my cheerleading days. -> Maybe Erind can train to workout to get good abs again. Even though she's short and doesn't have much of a chest, she has a six pack instead. And that can be a running theme among the three B's lol. They all have good abs. Because you were about to crush me, you hot-headed psycho, I added in my head. -> Everyone's a psychopath! Funny how I was an Adumbrae and an artificial Corebring, and some people wanted me dead, and yet I viewed everything as a game. Rather, a movie where I was the main character. I was going to ultimately win. That was what the script said. -> The power of plot armor. Although to be fair, Erind is both an Adumbrae and a Corebring, so she has a leg up. Wouldn’t want the movie to abruptly end. -> Like last time lol. Deen sounded like an angry parent. -> Deen is both Erind's mom and sister! “Could this Adumbrae be Kelsey?” -> Time for a family reunion! Thanks for the chapter!

Marquess

If it did break out, they probably have bigger issues than just it (maybe) being Kelsey. Breaking ‘out’ also means it’s now free to roam the city and beyond. I have a sneaking suspicion it won’t be missing for very long.

Vaporus

It was becoming unflatteringly short now, exposing my abdomen, which no longer had well-defined cuts during my cheerleading days. - cuts like back in

Vaporus

Excellent writing, good stuff!


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