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[REND] B2. 7.3 - Slippery Sisterly Sightings

🕑 Added 2025-11-06 12:40:41 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

Yep, I'm thinking here that Erind doesn't reunite Kelsey with Myra (at least for some time) so that she could manipulate Kelsey. This'd be like cult conditioning. Poor Kelsey, escaping a cult before, only to be under Erind's new cult. That said, this'll be really a great opportunity to show how manipulative Erind is. Would also show that Erind isn't a good person at all.

No Name

You know, it sort of occurred to me that Erind has a perfect opportunity right about now... Kelsey was recently stabbed in the back (or just captured) and (nearly?) used as an experimental subject. She is transforming into an abomination. She is isolated from anyone she trusts and likely emotionally off the deep end (at least temporarily). If Erind plays her cards right, she could catch herself a second Deen, except of the "obsessively obedient/protective" type (as opposed to Deens "obsessively possessive/protective" type). Erind could, with her current available assets, offer Kelsey everything she wants and needs: An offer of safety and protection (Blanch strong), a place to stay in hiding and the guarantee of an organization to assist (March Row gang and their places), kinship (fellow adumbrae with intact minds), and critically, a cure for the transformation (Erind would wring more corebring drugs out of Dario to suppress her own transformation, she could just lie about how much she needs for her own use. If brains work, then she could just add it to the menu. Probably secretly would be best). In short, perfect conditions for Erind to get Kelsey emotionally dependent on her. Especially as providing the place for Kelsey to hide means Erind could easily keep Kelsey socially and emotionally isolated while growing Kelseys dependence... And Erind does need a right hand as it were... who better to trust than a willing slave? Well, Temple? You've created the perfect setup; how far will you push Erinds manipulative tendencies?

Temple (REND)

I can manage the power. REND will not be stopped!

Temple (REND)

- I edited that line about finding the Adumbrae to be muttering. Deen and Myra left Erind outside so they wouldn't overhear her anyway. Thanks for the help proofreading! - True, Erind has lots of character development now. I don't think she'll stay a static character this time around. - We'll need some more Spooky Erind and Mother Fragment scenes in this book. - Yep, it would've been great to use Blanchette, but I don't think she should try with Deen around. I'll add a line about that. - 'Simile'! Hahahaha. Not smile. - True, I'll add Myra bringing up the not seeded part - Erind just linking Adumbrae for an offer they can't refuse lol - Originally, my idea was for Kelsey to be the Adumbrae friend. It was only in Arc 4 towards the end that I thought of Vanessa being the friend, and Kelsey was forgotten.

민설

Peak is back, sorry about your power though

Temple (REND)

You're right. I made a mistake there. I did mean mouth. Thanks for the help!

Temple (REND)

Whoops. Thanks for the help proofreading! Maybe everyone is an Adumbrae, lol.

ARIMA Maroon

Typos: “You mean signs of Myra’s power?” -> “You mean signs of Kelsey’s power?” “I need to find the Adumbrae,” I said to myself, “before Myra does.” -> Dialogue text should be italicized unless Erind is saying this out loud. But then that seems pretty risky to do so. ----- I didn’t specifically care for them, but I cared that they were alive for me to use. -> Erind has more people she thinks of as stuff she owns! She's developed so much since the past version. In my case, an Adumbrae-Corebring hybrid weirdo, what would the effect of eating an Adumbrae brain be? -> It would be funny to see the Mother Fragment's reaction. Like how would it react to Erind getting power to Spooky Erind by eating a brain. Or will it be happy that Erind killed an Adumbrae? I’d just have to gamble that I was better at searching than Myra. -> Sounds like a task for Blanchette. Kind of a weird simile that didn’t work. -> Not sure what this is referring to since Erind didn't smile? “No!” Deen exclaimed. “Linking with an Adumbrae’s mind? What if Croissant gets seeded as well?” -> Myra should probably counter they can't get seeded since they are Corebrings. Unless they know its possible for Corebrings to become Adumbrae? Maybe I could wake it up and make the person into a real Adumbrae. Not sure if the Adumbrae would agree to be my minion, though. -> This could be a fun application of Pino lol. I kind of want Erind to have an Adumbrae 'friend'. -> Vanessa is crying! Although it will be fun to see Erind manipulate both Myra and Kelsey. Thanks for the chapter!

Marquess

“You mean signs of Myra’s power?” I asked. “How would we know if the Adumbrae just regularly grabbed something or used a projection power?” —> Kelsey’s power Things have certainly spiced up. Now there’s two rogue adumbrae on the loose!

Frozzendeth

“Stay here,” Deen said. “I’ll check Myra to make sure she doesn’t do anything reckless. Don’t look at the bodies, so you won’t vomit. Breathe through your nose if it helps lessen the smell Should probably be mouth instead of nose when you are dealing with a smell :)

Vaporus

“You mean signs of Myra’s power?” I asked. “How would we know if the Adumbrae just regularly grabbed something or used a projection power?” - Kelsey

Vaporus

Excellent writing, good stuff!


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