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[REND] B2. 7.4 - Slippery Sisterly Sightings

🕑 Added 2025-11-08 12:44:01 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

Pino will be able to control people with enough practice and power ups someday. I think Regent's control is beyond just movement, he can control innards, right?

Marquess

You aren’t alone in that lol My brain is doing everything it can to rebuild the ship from crumbs and delusions.

Frozzendeth

ExD has rotted my brain, i cant read Deens comments about Erind being sexy as anything other than trying to feel out if its okay to flirt

Critical Bum

Will Erind be able to use Pino to control someone like Alec does in worm?

Temple (REND)

- Deen will eventually value Erind and do everything for her. - Scary muscle mommy lol - Yep, I originally thought of Erind reunting Kelsey with Myra, but it's more fun if she keeps them separate. If so, I think Erind should also just remain Red Hood when facing Kelsey? I'm not sure. - Erind will just tell it straight to Deen someday, everything that happened. She doesn't really need to lie about anything. - Blanchette will probably be affected more by the PCM machines, but Blanchette is also way stronger than base Erind. - We'll get to ExD again. It should be Three Bs there too. - Putting the B in Abs, that's a good one. And it'll be fun to have a training session too. - Sugar mommy Deen. - Thanks for sharing your thoughts and the help proofreading!

Temple (REND)

Thank you for the support!

Temple (REND)

Thank you for your support!

ARIMA Maroon

Typos: The PCM isn’t even like a megachurch, with hundreds of millions of dollars, lots of people donating money. -> The PCM isn’t even like a megachurch, with hundreds of millions of dollars and lots of people donating money. ---- “The ends don’t justify the means,” Deen said. -> Deen from the last cycle is sweating lol. Erind was always the end for Deen. Maybe Erind this cycle can try turning Deen into a utilitarian I recoiled on instinct as she wrapped her impressively toned arms around me. -> Erind doesn't want a muscle mommy lol. If I found Kelsey first, I wasn’t going to immediately tell Myra about it. -> I think this would be the more fun route too. Erind is going to be deceptively trying to keep Kelsey's and Myra's paths separate. Like Erind tells Kelsey that only she knows how to keep her safe and then keep her away from her sister. Maybe uses the professor's pills to keep her calm or she can use Pino to make sure Kelsey can control her body. And then for Myra, she keeps feigning innocence about finding Kelsey. And if Kelsey and Myra ever met, Kelsey says she would stay with Red Hood because of Erind's manipulations. We’d find a way to break free of his control, and it wasn’t going to be easy. Deen might be open to allying with Kelsey, too. From that point, I could reveal my Adumbrae self. -> I like this too. Erind first uses Kelsey as a barometer if Deen will accept her. And then when she does, Erind is also free to come out. Although, she needs to come up with a good story of why she became an Adumbrae. I guess being attacked at the train would be a good excuse. And then Erind can delve more into the conflict of Deen wanting to kill Adumbrae vs her want to protect Erind. And then Erind says she became a Corebring to try and stave off the Adumbrae infection, but it is only moderately effective since Erind still has physical changes. This could also lead to Deen hypothesizing that maybe they could give Kelsey an artificial Core to slow down her infection. And then Erind can upgrade her minions with Cores. Was it because I had an artificial Core? Would my Blanchette form suffer worse headaches? -> Would be fun to test since Blanchette doesn't really have a Core. I covered my exposed skin and slightly turned away, acting embarrassed. “Don’t be a creep. Keep your eyes on the road.” -> More Erind x Deen content lol. “So that you can make fun of me? I’m not your doll. And I’m not exposing my stomach until I get cut abs like you.” -> Sounds like a great excuse for Erind to work out lol. She can try doing planks while carrying extremely heavy objects on her back. Have this a sub goal to be as fit as her cheerleader days as she gets sort of jealous of Myra's and Deen's abs. And then the motto of the 3B's can be "Putting the B in Abs". You can also add this as progression lol. If Mom were to get in trouble, who’d fund my lifestyle of being a strong, independent woman? -> Deen clearly.

Vaporus

Excellent writing, good stuff!

Dolus

TfTC!


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