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[REND] B2. 8.1 - The Gangsters and the Sister

🕑 Added 2025-11-10 13:23:26 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

The challenge here is that Kelsey is a "normal" Adumbrae. Which means the Adumbrae has a strong hold on her. So far, we've mostly seen the fake Adumbrae who control their minds, and the natural Adumbrae who could suppress the entities in their head in the Prior Cycle.

Temple (REND)

- Could be that Erind is slowly showing her real self masking it as Red Hood? Lol - Erind is definitely going to do the hardwork here - She'll show up as per the script. - True, Blanchette plushie merch for sale - We'll see how Erind deals with Kelsey in the next chapter. - Not just the weather. There were also strong earthquakes last month. - Thanks for the help proofreading!

Temple (REND)

Yep. Overdrive probably intends to be that guy that's why he's being very supportive.

Temple (REND)

REND will continue for how many books and years it needs to, and we'll have a satisfying ending. Myra won't bother if it's just the PCM people. But maybe Kelsey is hiding here.

Temple (REND)

Yep, my country has such a bad location when it comes to weather and earthquakes. Thanks for your support!

Critical Bum

If Erind takes over all gangs. Won't she need a right hand man to watch over them? Someone to handle all the gangs' ledgers and organize them.

ARIMA Maroon

Typos: Overdrive scribbled with a red market on it. -> Overdrive scribbled with a red marker on it. (Overdrive must be really strong to carry the entire failing economy in his hands!) I couldn’t really blame them for being careless because I hadn’t though about scouting and stuff earlier. -> I couldn’t really blame them for being careless because I hadn’t thought about scouting and stuff earlier. ----- But I thought this glow-in-the-dark one was really funny. I was an easily amused girl. -> Maybe this could be one of her Red Hood face's gimmick. She just wears really weird and funny items. Maybe they thought that they weren’t going to fight at all. Red Hood would handle everything. They were just here to show support as the cheering squad. They’d look all tough in the background, flashing guns, while I did the hard work. -> Foreshadowing. “And now, I’m here,” I said, my voice muffled by my mask. I had thought of dropping onto the ground, but no way I’d crack the concrete with my weight. Better land on the truck so I could look down on my subordinates. -> Erind should become the master of coincidental appearances. I also decided to stay as cute and lovable Erind. Too risky to be Blanchette. -> Blanchette is also cute and loveable. And yep, this is Kelsey here. It's going to be interesting to see what she has been up to. However, Kelsey might not be willing to talk or be friends with Erind. -> Maybe Erind will seduce her with Blanchette lol. I guess Blanchette would be useful here since she automatically gets stronger, and if Kelsey can tear her apart, then maybe Blanchette can force her into submission. Although, Erind would have to restrain herself to not eat her. Another storm hit my country, this time a super typhoon. Fortunately, the center was far from my area, but electricity was still knocked out for a day because repairs from the previous storm weren't done. -> The weather is conspiring against you! Jk lol. I hope things get better for you. Thanks for the chapter!

No Name

"However, Kelsey might not be willing to talk or be friends with Erind." -> Well, if Vanessa taught us anything, it would be that a... dramatic.. first meeting is the key to resilient adumbrae friendships. Beating Kelsey within an inch of her life and kidnapping her should work wonders for Kelseys willingness to make friends. Maybe once she calms down from the trauma of being captured a second time? Or perhaps Erind could make use of Kelseys panicked state.

Marquess

God doesn’t want you to finish Rend, but I sure do. Man, I’m so excited to see finally see Kelsey! I originally thought it was Myra inside, but the lack of holes in the pavement (and the end note) made me change my mind.

Vaporus

Maybe they thought that they weren’t going to fight at all. Red Hood would handle everything. They were just here to show support as the cheering squad. They’d look all tough in the background, flashing guns, while I did the hard work. This was a spectacle to them than an actual fight. And was that guy collecting bets? Were they betting on how fast I’d kill the PCM guys or something else? These gangsters weren’t taking this seriously at all. - this was more of a spectacle ? this was spectacle to them more than a fight? One of those two anyways

Vaporus

Excellent writing, good stuff!

Frozzendeth

Man you are unlucky with the weather. Great chapter Erind playing cool is always fun


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