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[REND] B2. 12.1 - A Very Angry Sister

🕑 Added 2025-12-04 13:14:55 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

For her sister, Myra is willing to do anything.

Pibblepunk

Oh wow. Myra's way more murdery than I realized.

Vaporus

Excellent writing, good stuff!

Temple (REND)

- Erind, Savior of Adumbrae - What would Deen's thing be, as member of the Three Bs? - She launched a metal spike, I'll make that part clearer - Yeah, it's a really impactful part of the story that Erind is sort of the cure. It'll have more effects in the future beyond Kelsey and Myra. - Everybody just blame everything on Red Hood, lol - Thanks for the help proofreading and sharing your thoughts!

Temple (REND)

Yep, we'll learn more about the PCM's side of things next chapter.

ARIMA Maroon

Typos: Adumbrae will not cower me! -> Adumbrae will not make me cower! ----- She was so close to finding her sister that she wouldn’t let herself be stopped by morals or anything else. She’d sacrifice thousands of lives to get her sister back. -> Erind didn't have to sacrifice any! Truly, Erind is the most heroic person in this story. Myra grabbed his head and squeezed until the skull gave up resisting. -> Maybe Myra's thing can be head squeezing while Erind twists necks. And I was about to let you live, Myra thought, swinging her arms to send out a metal spike. -> Did she launch a metal spike? Like she can detach parts of herself? Or did her arms turn into a spike and she just hit him with it? Wouldn’t it be better if Myra didn’t have to find a cure for Kelsey’s condition? -> It's a great thing that Erind is the cure. It'd be funny to see how this eventually plays out, where Myra eventually finds the truth of the matter and how Kelsey is actually doing. I think our next chapter will be Cecilia, so we'd have some glimpse into the PCM -> Seems that everyone is focused on Red Hood these days. Will be fun to see how this climaxes. Nothing would stand in her way. -> I don't think Erind would appreciate being called nothing. Thanks for the chapter!

Critical Bum

Cecilia POV would be awesome. Im curious how effective all the gaslighting and lies are going to be.


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