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[REND] B2. 12.2 - A Very Angry Sister

🕑 Added 2025-12-06 12:04:18 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

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Vaporus

Excellent writing, good stuff!

Temple (REND)

I'm going to add that in. Thanks!

Temple (REND)

- Yeah, Erind is actually quite hard to find. And even if by appearance, it still would be difficult. Much easier to look for Deen and Myra, though where to look first would be the challenge. - Euphonia and the other Adumbrae that could control their bodies would be very interested in Erind. We can also build more about Erind's Mom. - Erind's plan to make the PCM think there are traitors is working. - I think Cecilia has the right to be angry with the Three Bs, lol. - It's going to be difficult for the PCM to piece this together because the truth is very crazy. - Thanks for the help proofreading and thanks for sharing your thoughts!

ARIMA Maroon

Typos: The main office didn’t immediately know about it, given the really hours. -> The main office didn’t immediately know about it, given the early hours. ----- “The one who destroyed my vessel, to be specific. Anything about the Adumbrae called ‘Eren’? I’m unsure if I heard her name correctly.” -> “The one who destroyed my vessel, to be specific. Anything about the Adumbrae called ‘Eren’? I’m unsure if I heard her name correctly.” -> Erind is lucky her name is so unique! They were both creations of Euphonia, after all. -> Interesting to see Euphonia have human-ish creations this time. Honestly, it would be fun to see more bonding between Erind and Euphonia this time around as they had a very brief interaction last version. Plus, maybe Euphonia will investigate Erind being able to 'cure' other Adumbrae. And as someone who has control over her body via bridging, Euphonia would be curious about Erind's claims and how this isn't the true way to free yourself from Adumbrae. All in all, we just need more Euphonia and Erind interactions! Maybe even this time Auntie Dora can give Erind a hug. Who’s the idiot who put into her head the idea we’re making a Purple Bloom? Once we catch the traitors—Bah! We don’t have time for that now.” -> That was Erind herself! And she's a smart girl, going to law school. The three whores who rudely interrupted her experiments were looking for a specific Adumbrae, believing that the PCM had captured it. -> Whoa! Uncalled for. “Red Hood… has your escaped test subject.” -> Erind needs to root out the spies! One of the priorities of being a criminal mastermind. “Then what in the Mother Core’s name is the golem Adumbrae searching for?” -> It'll be funny to see her put the pieces together. Thanks for the chapter!

No Name

“I neglected to mention the invaders..." -> Might be worth noting that what Red Hoods minions saw in the lab was essentially an adumbrae in a tank, linked to the brains of several humans. From Cecilias perspective, that could be seen by Red Hood as the proof she needed that the supposed intel was correct.


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