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[REND] B2. 14.2 - Friends and Secrets

🕑 Added 2025-12-18 13:38:19 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

Having a complex plot is a challenge for this format of scheduled releases compared to reading a full book. It was a problem for the Prior Cycle. The webnovel model is way better for progression stories since they usually have a very linear plot. I think as time goes on and we build on the intricate connections, they'll imprint more on readers minds. What I can do is to merge the connections that are possible to merge, and also don't forget important matters and leave them in the backseat for too long that readers will forget them. My aim was to have a comedic psychopath main character to avoid being an edgelord. Seems like it worked. Most of the time, I'm also surprised by the plot. Why it feels unpredictable for you is because I usually have last minute changes. I have a plot outline and plans, but when I write the chapters, I get ideas for twists so I am surprised at how things turn out too.

Temple (REND)

- Or maybe Keke is telling Kelsey about it? Or the sense is inherent in the monster body. - Erind probably doesn't have the patience to create a complex code. - The lobby and lady. I think I'll change that to Erind wondering if it's a rhyme. - It's like that thing with taking small amounts of poison until becoming immune. But this is sugar. - Erind and Kelsey seems to be on the same wavelength lol. - Thanks for the help proofreading and sharing your thoughts!

Vaporus

Hmm it's probably on my end but my usual comment wont seem post on these last few chapters

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ARIMA Maroon

Typos: Social media, it is. -> Social media, it was. ----- I tensed my cheeks for a moment, pissed that a new problem might have cropped up. “You were saying that it felt different?” -> Interesting that even Kelsey can detect artificial Cores, not just Keke. Although, Kelsey refers to it as an aura. I should write my notes in code or something. -> Erind's journey into cryptography has begun That rhymed! -> I'm confused at what Erind is rhyming. It might’ve worked if I hadn’t drunk two whole bottles of sweetened milk tea earlier. -> Erind is becoming immune to Deen's bribes! Towards the end, Erind and Kelsey were ping-ponging their thoughts. Their thought progression made sense, right? And also, the conclusions they drew. -> ExK is developing nicely! Thanks for the chapter!

Epikos

The drama is intense and there are moments I get frustrated because there is a lot to track. It's fortunate for me that I've binge-read up to this point, but having to carry these many entanglements for weeks is a worrying prospect. I will say this, as a first time reader of Rend, I appreciate your restraint on how far Erind's psycho can go and giving her consistent rules we can believe in. I also like how you have various characters being proactive and affecting the world as we go. I'm really curious of what would happen in the long run. Would Deen become crazier than Erind? How would the reveal of Erins being a half-core, half-monster go? Is Myra going to survive this (she's going down a dark path that's even darker than Erind in some regard)? Will the sisters meet? And hell, if Erind, Kel, Myra, and Deen SOMEHOW get on a similar page ... would they form a team under Redhood. Granted, this story is unpredictable for me and I'm sensing a major character death incoming. Which is fine by me because you've definitely put in the work for it.


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