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[REND] B2. 15.1 - Chips to Bargain, Chips to Eat

🕑 Added 2025-12-20 11:44:38 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

You're right. Regeneration should spit the foreign object out of the body, or could crush it and then spit it out. That was my thinking why Adumbrae couldn't have trackers inside them. We had one scene before where Erind's body spit out the bullets inside of her. It's possible to have an excuse that Myra's Core got affected by some anti-Adumbrae weapon of the PCM, and her regeneration was wonky. Perhaps that's the way to save the chapter with minor edits instead of a major rewrite. I'll think about how to proceed. You're right that there are a lot of implications if an internal bomb is possible. The government will just make a suicide squad lol.

Temple (REND)

Probably at the start, Deen wouldn't ask Erind. But when the going gets tough, Deen might have no choice but to ask Erind for help. Maybe Everett.

Temple (REND)

- REND, full of self-mutilation moments lol - Everyone is required to have body horror implements - At least Kelsey is safe with Erind haha - Myra's threat could probably buy some time

Temple (REND)

Thanks for the support!

ARIMA Maroon

I have only one option left… If Myra couldn’t dig the device out of her back, she should do it from the front. She didn’t attempt it before because she was afraid of hitting her spine. -> Self-mutilation time! It didn’t just cover her face. The sheet was alive, wriggling to enter her mouth and nose, and even her ears. Tiny tendrils tried to pry her eyelids open to reach her eyes. -> I see the PCM have their own body horror devices. Didn’t this mean that the PCM didn’t actually have Kelsey? -> It's funny that Erind's pettiness got Myra trapped in this situation. “I am not,” Myra said, sensing that this might be her bargaining chip. “What I have here is an artificial Core. You are messing with people way above your pay grade.” -> Time to see if this threat works. Probably not though. It's time for Erind to save the day! Thanks for the chappy!

Vaporus

Excellent writing, good stuff!

Epikos

I can see Deen calling Erind just so she can get close to her and figure out the lies. Deen has also seen how useful Erind could be, and as much as Deen cares about Erind (to where it might tip into yandere territory), Deen also cares about herself and knows that Erind can help protect her when Gabe can't. ... And personally, I'd like to see what chaos/drama would stir if Erind/Kel are at risk of running into Deen/Jo.

No Name

With no hesitation, she straightened all the fingers of her hand and forcefully stabbed them into her body, -> Forming spikes, or a sharp edge to cover her fingertips would have made this much easier. Even if Myra cannot absorb foreign entities within her own body, why did she not absorb the taser or its barbs when she reached it with her hand? She could easily break free of these restraints. -> Because Myra didn't just firsthand experience how easy it really is to shackle her properly... A remote-controlled explosive, implanted near her spine (or wound around it), with even a simple anti-tamper, and Myra is done. Or just a more potent taser device. Which begs the question, why did Cecilia not prepare this, along with trackers, etc., for all her test subjects? In case of a breakout? On a related note, by making it possible to implant foreign objects fully within that regeneration cannot remove, and with how easily adums survive even the most crude forms of surgery, you've made permanently restraining and enslaving adumbrae very easy unless they have specific abilities. Might not have been the best idea for the story at large... (honestly, this applies to the PCM being able to contain adumbrae so easily more generally as well) To elaborate why might not be a good idea, it's because major elements of the story make a lot less sense now: The BID (and to a lesser extent, the Hive) exterminating adumbrae directly is sensible, under the assumption that adumbrae are too dangerous/difficult to contain due to their abilities and powers. Undermining that by making adumbrae trivial (with government resources, and excepting particular powers) to contain prior to bridging, which does not proceed without access to specific supplies? Adums are no longer a threat requiring elimination, they are a resource for weapons development, and would be harvested on a large scale instead. The BID would be heavily invested towards detection and non-lethal capture methods, not elimination. Further, the justification for a government sponsoring an artificial core project just plummeted, when a much easier source of superpowers is readily available, one which intrinsically comes with plausible deniability on its purpose against the Hive. Research into keeping the human in control of the body after seeding would also be a major focus with basically limitless funding on a national level, as humans can be controlled, even if they have special powers. The topic wouldn't be a fringe research subject requiring illegal organizations and makeshift labs. Basically, if seeded individuals up to complete manifestations are controllable, then quite a few elements of the world-building fall apart at the seams...


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