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[REND] B2. 15.2 - Chips to Bargain, Chips to Eat

🕑 Added 2025-12-23 14:10:20 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

Erind probably gains different insights because of how uniquely she looks at the world.

Demoet

On chapters like this I always think to myself. Man Erind is smart and well put together, a great help to the other characters. Then I imagine it from her side. Getting the drama pumping, making half the info up, throwing out stuff just to setup future problematic plots just cause. Or even better daydreaming about sweets and rhyming. So I think oh yeah, I can see why people trust this mess of a character. Good job portraying her and her ‘friends’. XD

Temple (REND)

Ah, Deen wasn't ignoring Erind here. Deen turned off her phone so that she won't get tracked later on if something bad happens. The call just automatically goes to voicemail.

Temple (REND)

- Keke likes stretching a lot haha - In Keke's defense, everyone is lying - Erind probably just wants to eat chips and is too lazy to go out haha - Whoops, I'm changing that to Erind - Kelsey might be like Malevola in Dispatch - ExK winning over ExD? hahaha - The more voices in your head, the merrier - Thanks for the help proofreading and sharing your thoughts!

Temple (REND)

Thanks for the continued support!

Frozzendeth

Keke just keeps whispering in kelseys ear, like wormtounge in lotr. Cool chapter, my only problem with it is deen would never not answer a call from Erind. And not enough ExD

ARIMA Maroon

Typos: “Why are you so casual about my sister getting examined?” Kelsey asked, leaning down to glower at Myra. -> “Why are you so casual about my sister getting examined?” Kelsey asked, leaning down to glower at Erind. ----- As your brain physically changes, a few memories are inadvertently cast away. -> Seems like a stretch. Perhaps Keke is not being totally honest. (I’ll be here to counsel you if her lies start to cloud your judgment.) -> But what about Keke's lies? Erind didn’t answer her directly, swerving the conversation to another excuse. -> Oh no, Erind's on the back foot. “Why are you so casual about my sister getting examined?” Kelsey asked, leaning down to glower at Myra. -> Wow! Myra appeared in Erind's room. Kelsey wore a leather vest for her top; men’s size to accommodate her muscular shoulders and large bust. -> Kelsey is a muscle mommy. “No big deal. I’ll go naked if I have to. Let’s go to Marsh Row.” -> Sounds like peak ExK content. What is it with characters close to Erind having voices in their heads? Kelsey and Keke. Deen and Gabe. Even Erind has Spooky Erind in her head sometimes. Hopefully, this chapter wasn't confusing because it's not 3 people having a conversation. It's 2 conversations going on. -> I was able to track the conversation just fine. I like it when characters have multiple voices in their heads, it reminds me of plurality. Thanks for the chappy!

Vaporus

Excellent writing, good stuff!


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