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[REND] B2. 17.2 - An Offer I Might Refuse

🕑 Added 2026-01-03 10:12:35 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

- Thanks for the help proofreading! - Lol, Deen would be the shorter one - ExD coming soon to the rewrite haha - Yep, so far though, we haven't seen the Corebrings yet - Deen is feeling very nosy, lol. - Everyone is confused hahaha

Temple (REND)

Going to be at the end of this Book, and after this mission

Temple (REND)

Dolls fetish? LOl

Temple (REND)

Yep, flashback talk while she was in the car with OD. I'll just add a clarifier.

Temple (REND)

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Temple (REND)

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ARIMA Maroon

Typos: The hell was she talking about? -> The hell is she talking about? (This is italicized so it should be in present tense) ----- I should’ve told Overdrive to take a picture of Deen and me so that I could look at this happy moment whenever I was annoyed at my shortness. -> Now we need art of Blanchette and Deen. I looked down at Deen’s chest. -> Erind x Deen is leaking in! I should keep her away from augmented people, especially BID agents. -> As well as the Hive Corebrings too, given what happened at the end of the last version lol. “You don’t need to show your face; I know that you’re protecting your identity. I just want to talk with you. It’s this feeling…” -> I'm curious what Deen is feeling lol. Myra did spill the beans, I thought while showing no reaction. Let these idiots puzzle over the truth of the situation. No way they’d know what it actually was because things were confusing as fuck. -> Confused enemies are the best! Thanks for the chappy!

No Name

Who knows? The previous plan seemed to be to have her brainwash Kelsey, but that looks to have been dropped...

Cheese Bread

ooh I'm such a sucker for identity reveals, I'm looking forward to this

Frozzendeth

It feels like Deen is really into small girls, with how she talked about meeting blanchette untransformed after the mission

민설

Wonder when ernid (misspelled intentional) is gonna do something like, actually morally super wrong? From what I remember in the last version that was arc 3 with what she did to that woman's husband and stuff

민설

“But you also don’t want to get eaten,” I said. “Yeah, yeah. If you see me becoming really big, just tell everyone to go far, far away. Don’t look back.” → this is a flashback talk right? Since duh, she can't talk in this form

Dolus

TfTC!

Vaporus

Excellent writing, good stuff!


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