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[REND] B2. 18.1 - Trees and Revelations

🕑 Added 2026-01-07 13:14:35 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

If Red Hood wasn't Erind (who has met Cecilia before), and is actually a boss Adumbrae (who would know Euphonia), then Dreyfus and Cecilia would have probably won their gamble of an alliance. And it wouldn't have mattered if the two of them were at the other end of the parking lot or right in front of Red Hood if Red Hood decided to kill them. They had to show they didn't intend to start a fight, though, so they went up close. We barely have any clue about what Euphonia is up to. The backstory from last time was that their group was controlled by a high-ranking Corebring, so that changes all their perceived goals. We have to wait to know more about Euphonia and the others to actually know what the plan was giving out these items. The backstory will be different this time. Erind's thinking is that she can turn to human while Kelsey is stuck as an Adumbrae. If the worst happens, at least only Kelsey is dead, and Erind will probably start to live like a fugitive. Erind reaction to Deen was that she was delaying the reveal because of various reasons. But logic won out and she decided to go with Deen. The BID agents probably won't take down Erind, but they'll call for backup. Or maybe Corebrings are listening in on BID activities. I'll see if I can clarify more that Kelsey split thing and Erind's aversion to unmasking herself.

Temple (REND)

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No Name

Hmm... keeping up the pace of the plot is one thing, but this somehow feels on the edge of the territory of axing plot threads and rushing the story... Maybe I'm still just in the mindset of the more meandering previous cycle... Also, I feel like we are veering a bit into idiot plot territory here... Why would both the organizations second-in-command and what would likely be an core member of their mission-critical research team both be present in person to meet with someone as dangerous as red hood? Feels a bit like you just wanted them both cleaned up at once. I hope Erind had the sense to thoroughly smash up the anti-adumbrae cylinders beyond any hope of recovery or analysis; if the BID could get their hands on those and reverse engineer them, Erind is fried. They could be deployed anywhere as a basically perfect anti-adum detection and suppression system. Unless there is some 4D plotting going on, Euphonia is an idiot for sharing these things with anyone; if the operating principle is found out by anyone else, she would have basically strangled any possibility of more adums joining their ranks in the future (assuming they Euph is part of a similar group as last time). Basically guaranteeing the extinction of whatever adum group she is currently part of (herself included) in the long run. Why would Erind send Kelsey off in a random direction when she knows Kelsey and Myra getting caught would be catastrophic for herself? By separating them, she has a dangerous unaccounted variable. One which could lead the BID straight to her, and no means of confirming the situation unless Kelsey drags herself back to Red Hood territory. Splitting pursuer attention using bait which would be disastrous if caught, is not a smart move. Sticking Kelsey with Deen would have been the better maneuver... What should I do? -> Why would Erind even consider ditching Deen? She knew full well from the start that Deen is her most reliable option for an escape, and probably spent longer thinking about it than it would have taken to snatch her up. If she cannot escape BID pursuit in werewolf form with Deens help, there is no chance she'd get enough distance on them alone to safely transform back anyways. Either they escape fully in werewolf form, and can split up before Erind transforms back, or Erind has to show Deen her appearance. In the latter case, Erind would not have made it out alone, as she transforming back without having lost her pursuers if Deen is not there to advice is potentially suicidal. There is no loss case in bringing Deen. The sensible option in this whole situation would have been escaping with Kelsey+Deen (optionally Myra, M could also be carried in Kelseys hands) on her back. No unaccounted loose ends. If Deen’s Guardian Angel was so worried about the BID, it could mean that they had the means to take down my giant werewolf form. -> Apparently, the BID has gotten major upgrades from the previous cycle... Even the supposed top agents were just gnats with a dangerous self-destruct at Eve's (i think that was the clubs name?).

ARIMA Maroon

Typos: I marked the troublemaker Fletcher sisters safe -> I marked the troublemaker Fletcher sisters as safe ----- I shouldn’t have told Tower Cop that the PCM was making a Purple Bloom! -> Erind has now encountered unforeseen consequences! “Graoahr rrraorg?” Unholy, am I? -> Technically, Kelsey would be the unholy one since she's like a demoness. The stupid machine got shredded as if hit by a shotgun. -> Now I need fanart of Blanchette with a shotgun. I decided to wait for Deen. Maybe I should stop avoiding the big reveal. It was just that I sucked at handling emotional scenes. -> Just got to wing it! Break a leg! Also, as much as I liked Cecilia’s character, there was no way she’d survive this encounter. May she rest in pieces in Blanchette’s stomach. -> Rip Cecilia. Although, I remember in the last version, rather than digestion, it was more like whatever Blanchette ate was like teleported away, such that Blanchette grew immediately. And what a bonding moment for Erind and Deen. We’ll have Deen’s POV next chapter. -> Hyped for the reveal! Thanks for the chappy!

Vaporus

Excellent writing, good stuff!


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