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[REND] B2. 18.4 - Trees and Revelations

🕑 Added 2026-01-13 08:16:57 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

- As for Erind lying that the Adumbrae is influencing her, that's the choice because otherwise she's going to admit that those are her own acts, which she won't do. And Erind isn't going to stop eating people for the sake of appearances in front of Deen. There's no alternative for Erind. It'll be up to Deen's reaction, yes. Perhaps having the Core now would make Deen have some security. - Erind had already saved Deen twice, Erind has to shift the face. Perhaps I'll add a discussion on this in Book 3. There are many occassions in the Prior Cycle when Erind has to shift her face. It's okay here, the story is just she's rising to the occassion. - Erind just says she won't return. In her mind that's only temporary. Erind doesn't have any plans to go to Marsh Row until the BID chills out. Then Erind can think of reasons to go there, or just keep it a secret from Deen. - We'll find out more about Euphonia's tech. But yes, they're dangerous. Will probably update Euphonia's story, though the old backstory still works. And that line about not knowing and finding out about Euphonia was meant that they were hoping they won't meet her, and so they won't know about her. It's essentially saying that it's best if Euphonia is far from them. They won't go out of their way to hunt for info about Euphonia and risk meeting Euphonia. - They're going to make excuses not to join missions because they'll gauge how far they can push back against Dario. They have valid reasons to make excuses, like they're afraid, they want to stay away after the docks mission, they're hesitant, etc. Instead of immediately rebelling someday, it's best if they do a push and pull now. If the Dario threatens them, they comply. Now they know what Dario's threat will be, and so on. They'll gain more info with a push and pull for now. And then work from there. Like will the Professor send other teams and so on.

No Name

As much as possible, I’d stick to my timid face and blame all my acts of violence on the Adumbrae ‘influencing me’. -> This was always such a self-sabotaging lie by Erind in the previous cycle, to the point it honestly would have belonged in ExD if Deen reacted to it in any sensible manner... If someone you care about confesses to having psychotic episodes where they are compelled to do incredibly dangerous things, would you allow them to act freely? Likely not; rather, if their actions suddenly become uncharacteristic, you'd do what you can to block them from harming themselves directly or by consequences. Erind "confessing" to not being fully in control is a quick way to get Deen to limit or block Erinds agency. Erind is literally consigning herself to side-character status, because who would let a self-confessed insane individual run the show? (And who would let someone who periodically goes insane because of a mind-parasite use a mind-interfering power on them? The whole reason for having Erind team up with the Core group would be dead in the water right there...) I don't see how the lie would go undetected for long, either? Last cycle, Deen was never in non-hostile contact with any Adums, allowing this losing-control thing to not have a reality check. This time, if Deen and Kelsey contact, the latter can provide an account of what the progression of adumbrae possession is actually like. And guess who would have a vested interest in learning about adums to help her friend... “You’re a very strong person, Erind,”, “Always so heroic,” -> If Deen does not see a timid face, is it really the right face to uphold? I don’t know yet, but we’ll figure something out if it comes to that. -> Don't proceed with your concrete backup plan to save your life if necessary. Instead, cling to ideals and empty wishes. Brilliant! Don’t worry. I won’t return to Marsh Row, -> I presume this is empty lip service from Erind, but she really should have argued a case here... She loves her elaborate lies so much, so it honestly stands out that she never actually uses these lies to build up to anything significant. Erind could claim that she wants to save seeded individuals with the power she now has, but requires an organization willing to work with adums (that is, crims) as a foundation to get started. That is something which Deen would struggle to argue against, and it's for once a useful, difficult to unravel, lie. What Erind would actually want is an army of adums dependent on her to remain human, but superficially, these goals would be identical. After all, seeded individuals would likely be willing to fight for their lives and humanity. Whether they have those or not, BID agents are plenty scary already. -> The real danger are squarely the anti-adum pillars, they are a massive potential hazard which Erind is ill-adviced to ignore. A complete, categorical game-changer in the war with adumbrae if they can be reverse engineered. Especially in cleaning out cities of seeded individuals. “It’s best that we don’t know and don’t find out about Euphonia,” -> Seriously? An adumbrae capable of creating and distributing unparalleled tech, a potentially very dangerous enemy, a potentially very useful ally, and your plan for dealing with them is shoving your head in the sand and go la-la-la not listening? If he calls for another mission, we’ll make excuses. -> That is a terrible plan. If they want to escape, they should keep Dario under the impression that they are willingly staying until the last moment. (If possible, they'd want to worm their way further into the organization.) If they are marked as likely to rebel they will at best be monitored more closely, at worst eliminated. And if monitoring ramps up before they have sufficient preparations in order? E&D are done for either way. E&D have no idea about the extent of the Professors organization or its capacity. To escape, completely blind to anything about the enemy? They would have to flee the country and go dark forever, or hide behind an army. Unless Deen is able to hire PMCs, Erinds gangs + adum assembly would be the only realistic choice to hand.

Temple (REND)

Yep, I'm also sad about Cecilia. But the PCM is still there, and Euphonia too. I feel that Erind being too passive hurt the story at times in that it delayed it a lot. Like we were already in Arc 6 and only just reached Red Island. If Erind is too passive, the story doesn't progress. Maybe we can revisit the passiveness someday when she meets another group of people. Book 3, we'll return to Dario and the gang. Also, Tower Cop will stick around for some time. Reo became a bit developed in Arc 6 of the Prior Cycle. Maybe Reo and Everett can have their time to shine in Book 3 now. Book 3 is going to do a lot of heavy lifting. We'll also see how Deen and Erind will develop. And yes, Mom's vacation time too. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and your support!

Temple (REND)

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Temple (REND)

Well, they still have their tops on. They weren't sleeping naked among the leaves and dirt haha.

Temple (REND)

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KanadianKitsune

we removed our sports bras covering our Cores. -> *the_rock_vine_boom.mp4*

Cheese Bread

T4C!

Vaporus

Excellent writing, good stuff!

Reppyxz

Dammit! I’m already caught up. I’m a little sad the mad scientist girl died. I was really looking forward to getting another chapter from her POV where she’s misunderstanding the entire situation. And I’m really surprised how much more of a leader Erind is in the cycle. I’m so used to her sticking to her background character persona. But that’s basically gone already. Erind is really gonna need to evolve her ‘face’ around Dean. Or even the rest of the characters really. Dario really has a shit storm brewing. Basically half of his team is against him if you’re including himself as a team member. And I imagine it’s only gonna get worse for Dario. I really like how much more important tower cop is in this cycle. though it’s hard to tell if his death is right around the corner. Or maybe he’ll pull through, I have no clue. Though this goes for all the characters. All the characters feel more important and impactful. Well except for oberon and fire dude. But I do expect next book will probably get a bit more of them. I can never remember fire dude’s name. Honestly, the other hero wannabes kind of need some focus. Because I fear the other characters are quickly going to outgrow them at the pace the story going now. But that’s assuming they’re gonna be more long-term characters. If that’s not the case then it’s not really an issue. Who knows maybe the other half of the hero wannabes are gonna be antagonists/enemies. Excluding Dario obviously. Because he definitely an antagonist. Unless Something is drastically gonna change? I’m really excited for some mother daughter bonding time! I’m really curious to see how suspicious Dean is of Erind actually being Erind. It makes me wonder if Dean is truly an endgame ally. I’m pretty sure she’ll be an ally for the entirety of the story, but I could see her going against Erind near the end of the story. But that’s really hard to say for sure. Because what would even be Erind goals at that stage of story. Anyways, thanks the chapter. Hope you’re having a wonderful day!


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