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[REND] B2. 11.2 - A New Roommate

🕑 Added 2025-11-29 10:06:14 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

Leather would probably still tear. It's probably better to just buy cheap clothes and let it tear. I don't intend Erind to be able to completely revert Kelsey. Just some changes, but not a total cure. Perhaps someday, Erind can do it. But not now. I was thinking whether Erind pretends she can do it or not. Erind's way needs the artificial Core + drugs, and even that is just stopping Spooky Erind a bit. Erind can't exactly offer that as a method because that meant relying on Dario and the Professor. I chose Erind to tell the truth that she can't do it (on her own) because lying is more complicated. She doesn't even know for sure what Keke is doing. If Erind says she can do it, but then she can't do much, Keke will influence Kelsey to not believe Erind. But if Erind says she can't do it, and then somewhat partially reverts Kelsey, then Erind will still have a hold on Kelsey. The results will be Erind's card. My thought now is that Erind should sell core + Pino link as the way to salvation. She can't just say pills because they need the core for that. Lol at being a complete fiend. I'm not sure an Adumbrae can be affected by addictive drugs. But that's the way, to create an addiction. And that's with using Pino. Erind has to make sure Kelsey doesn't have any other choice but her to rely on.

No Name

“I’ll see if I can buy you better clothes since you’ll be staying here for some time,” -> There aren't many kinds of clothes that could withstand being worn on sharp scales... Maybe leather? Would that look good on the scaly siren? “I don’t think I can do that,” I honestly said.-> I don't know if you plan to have Erind succeed in helping revert Kelseys transformation, but this is not what Erinds answer should have been here, if she wants control over Kelsey. Fact is, she does have some leads on reversing Adumbrae transformations: Corebring drugs and mutant brains. She doesn't know whether the latter works, but the former does for her, so Erind should imply there is a chance. Erind should reveal that she has access to drugs that works to revert her own transformation, and it's what she uses herself, but has never tested it with a case as severe as Kelsey (not giving her excessive hopes that could disillusion her if they don't work). Ok, so, it is time for "Being a manipulative sneak 101". If the cure(s) Erind has does work, she should make certain that Kelsey got the following impressions: 1: Erind has drug(s) that work for herself, and she uses them herself to remain human. She should NOT reveal what they are or where she gets them from. (Might want to imply that Kelsey would be better off not knowing, as Kelsey will need to consume a lot of it, or some other excuse.) 2: Erinds access to the treatment is sporadic and uncertain. This isn't true, Erind can get Dario to provide as much as needed by lying about how much she needs for her own use, blaming her adum transformations on the core, but it is convenient if Kelsey believes it to be the case. The sum of these two points is Kelsey reaching the following conclusion: Erind is sharing her own lifeline to help Kelsey, despite the supply being inconsistent. Erind is risking turning into a monster herself to keep Kelsey human. In effect, the goal is making Kelsey both indebted and dependent on Erind: The former through Erinds selflessness, and the latter through access to what allows her to remain human. The supposed sporadic access to the corebring drug could also be used as an excuse to punish Kelsey if she isn't obedient enough: Kelsey watching her own body start transforming again when the supply is cut off would be a good reminder of how importand Erind is to her, and what Erind does for her. Erind would have to allow herself to visibly transform as well in the same timeframe to avoid suspicion. If you want Erind to be a complete fiend: If, contrary to Erinds belief, drugs do affect Adums: Erind could cut the actual cure with nicotine or some other substance with a tendency to create psychological dependence (she does have a drug operation under her - it's time for science!). For maximum gaslighting effects, combine the administration of the cure with a socializing session, while otherwise keeping Kelsey under complete social isolation.

Temple (REND)

- Nudist Erind? Lol. Erind won't ever be on the run alone because Deen will be there. - Whoops, I'll just have to reword that about Rule #3. They have already introduced each other before. - But Erind still has to clothe and feed her maid. Maybe Kelsey is really her kid. - ExK will be the spinoff for REND Rewrite? Lol

Temple (REND)

Kelsey is in danger lol.

Temple (REND)

Oh, that'll be a comedic plotline someday haha.

Temple (REND)

Thank you!

Aura

Hehe can't wait for Kelsey to misunderstand Erind's relationship with Deen and try "help them" xD

ARIMA Maroon

Hmm, how is that going to work out with Kelsey living at Erind's place lol? Erind is going to have to hide Kelsey from her mom.

ARIMA Maroon

Perhaps I should go completely nude like Kelsey and no longer care about my clothes getting destroyed? -> Erind can do this once she permanently has to be on the run. She won't have to worry about appearances for other people so she's free to go around nude all she wants lol. She didn’t introduce herself to me. -> That's a Rule #3 violation that Erind just committed. I now understand why Mom got angry whenever I tracked mud into the house as a kid. -> Maybe Kelsey can be Erind's kid lol. I got myself a monster maid. -> And she works for free! It's interesting that Kelsey, not Deen, so far has the most potential to become close with Erind. -> The universe yearns for Erind x Kelsey now. Thanks for the chapter!

Vaporus

Excellent writing, good stuff!

Vaporus

Yes

Klakkers

It wouldbe realy funny if Kelsey was, in fact, not the fourth Adumbrea

KanadianKitsune

It's interesting that Kelsey, not Deen, so far has the most potential to become close with Erind. -> Deen will move Heaven and Earth to remain Erind's #1 "friend"

dtape467

speaking of Erind's mom, isn't she coming to visit soon?


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