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[REND] B3. 1.3 - Four Bs Assemble

🕑 Added 2026-01-21 08:44:11 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

Kelsey will probably double down Keke is dormant. We'll have to see how it goes. Pills are simple, yep. Deen could probably get more, even the booster, because her power is most valuable among all of them. She doesn't even need to point to Erind. That's a very cool idea for Red Hood to negotiate with the Professor for Cores. Hmmm... Maybe we can go that way for Book 2. And Pino could be helpful to anchor the mind of the Adumbrae or something. This needs a lot more thought into implementing. Thanks for the awesome ideas! I think we can tie this in to the 4Bs thinking how to make Dario move.

Temple (REND)

- Erind's Adumbrae Apothecary, open for business lol. - Yeah, yuri patch isn't implemented in this universe yet. - They need to find a Core first haha. - Yep, but no Domino yet. - Next chapter we'll name Pino. - Thanks for sharing your thoughts and the help proofreading!

Temple (REND)

Thanks for your support!

Temple (REND)

That's another B hahaha

ARIMA Maroon

Typos: Would be easy for them to do if the story that the artificial Corebring experiment was a secret government project were true. -> Would be easy for them to do if the story that the artificial Corebring experiment was a secret government project was true. “Nah, Johann’s wouldn’t snitch on me,” -> “Nah, Johann wouldn’t snitch on me,” You were lying that your form when we fought the Adumbrae inside the PCM lab was your Core power -> You were lying when you said that the form you used when we fought the Adumbrae inside the PCM lab was your Core power ------ I was the savior of all Adumbrae. I should charge exorcism fees, put up shop downtown with a sign, and everything. -> Well, maybe be a bit more discreet about it lol. “Call it a woman’s intuition,” said Myra, blushing. -> Sadly, it seems Myra isn't gay enough in this cycle. Hopefully, times with the 4B's will change that! If I melded with a Core before the seeding changed my body too much, it might’ve worked. Or perhaps it was one in a billion chance, what happened to Erind. Erind could also be just a different kind of Adumbrae.” -> You won't know if you don't try. How will the 4Bs get more pills or even an artificial Core? -> Hyped to see Kelsey get a Core! Honestly, I think the easiest way of getting stuff from Dario is if Erind had access to Domino, that way, Dario can just be easily fooled by a person seeking to join their Corebring group so he just gives free pills/Cores to Domino. And we still haven’t named Pino in the story. -> Clearly Deen needs to be the one to name Pino just like Blanchette lol. Thanks for the chapter!

Vaporus

“Nah, Johann’s wouldn’t snitch on me,” Myra said. “Trust me. I know him.” - "Nah, Johann wouldn't

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I nodded. “I’ll do it.” -> I wonder if it is time for Erind to (via mind-link) call out Kelsey on helping Keke, and try to get a handle on what the situation actually is... "How will the 4Bs get more pills or even an artificial Core?" -> I feel like the pills could be rather simple... Just play off the fact that Erind is only showing Dario a single part of a larger ability, and claim (technically correctly) that it feels incomplete. There are more masks, Erind can feel it, but she cannot manifest them yet, so give more drugs! As for the core... personally, I'd probably frame it to Dario as an external proposal for cooperation with the Professor: 1: Red hood approaches 3B (Dario doesn't know of Kelsey) with an offer for 3B to carry up the command chain. She wants to attempt an experiment with Adum/Core hybrids, theorizing that such a beings powers would be a unique fusion of adum and core attributes, possibly greater than the sum of its parts (or claim that she knows hybrids to exist). So, she proposes a joint experiment to see if they can produce them artificially: RH sends an adum and provides various powers that could help the process, Prof supplies a core. 2: As a guarantee that RH and adum won't just run off with the Core, RH will send an adum with a direct connection to a core team member (Kelsey), (maybe Kelsey could join the core team in their jobs?) and allow Dario to observe her growth. 3: Prof cannot attempt to bring RHs adum anywhere without prior approval, else RH will bring consequences on the whole core team (i.e, nobody would cooperate with Dario attempting to nab Kelsey) and the Profs larger organization. Basically, letting Kelsey close to Dario, and letting the Prof get his data, but keeping her safe in the process by promising organized violence if the Prof tries to run off with her. This process would open up the possibility for a rather interesting potential plot direction: Temple, have you considered letting Pino (or heck just Erind or any mask, doesn't matter) serve as a necessary catalyst for Adum-Core hybrid creation? If the Hive is an enemy Erind must eventually face, and you plan to have Erind actually build up her organization, you could have the following scenario down the line: The Supplier can turn humans into adumbrae. The Professor can produce Cores. Red hood has the means to fuse the two power sources to create hybrids. All three factions are fundamentally antagonistic to the Hive, but their individual methods are intrinsically too weak to oppose them: The Hive knows exactly how to fight both adumbrae and corebring. And so, to get an edge, they need a new power: It's a perfect synergy for a three-way anti-Hive alliance.

Vaporus

Excellent writing, good stuff!

Brepn

Deep Erind voice: “I’m Batman”

Cheese Bread

T4C!


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