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[What Kills Me Makes Me Stronger] 1 - Applying for a Job

🕑 Added 2026-01-23 04:48:15 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

- The age of tall FMC incoming lol. - She'll eventually have another pet. - Aunt Jemma is a cosmic entity that appears in all dimensions. - Yep, yuri bait sprinkling. - This story will be a break and rest for my brain from writing Erind. It'll be more of becoming tough as she becomes stronger, an MC pushing herself hard and so on. - Thanks for sharing your thoughts and the help proofreading!

Temple (REND)

I really love Control. Oldest House. First Tower hahaha. Yes, she'll have a revival power and will have skill choices to solve the deaths that she'll experience. She'll be able to go in and out of the tower. As of now, the tower is used by families with magic, sending people there to farm things. Those are some of the people in the lobby. We'll have a tall FMC now haha. She's kind of tall if she says that she can use height as an advantage in interviews. Thanks for sharing your thoughts!

ARIMA Maroon

Typos: When I first encountered magic, real magic, not like those with tricks and illusions -> When I first encountered magic, real magic, not like those tricks and illusions The most important part was the in-person interview. No more AI or dubious algorithm shifting through thousands of applications, trashing those that didn’t contain certain words and phrases. -> The most important part was the in-person interview. No more AI or dubious algorithm sifting through thousands of applications, trashing those that didn’t contain certain words and phrases. The street cleaner and I, both. -> Both my eyes and the street cleaner's. Talk to the Resident over there. -> Talk to the resident over there. (Should this be a proper noun?) ----- I should’ve just worn flats; I was taller than average anyway. -> Hey taller women are cool! (Not saying Erind isn't cool, but it's fun to have a tall protagonist). This should’ve been the number one topic instead of Aunt Jemma cheating on her husband! -> Is she related to Erind lol? Erind also had an Aunt Gemma I’d even bring my black cat from home. -> OMG she has a cute pet! She totally needs this as a familiar she brings along. “For biometrics?” I extended my arm. She took my hand and bit my finger, her sharp teeth puncturing skin. I yanked back my arm. “Ow!” -> Potential Toxic yuri spotted! Overall, interesting first chapter. Definitely relatable with the perils of searching for jobs now. Interesting to see how her personality develops since she'll be a lot different from Erind. And it was fun seeing her in denial of the tower being magical. Thanks for the chapter!

Reppyxz

This seems quite interesting. Kind of reminds me of Control’s opening. (Control is a video game in case you haven’t heard of it.) Looking forward to more. that is, if you decide to pursue writing more of this. I definitely like the idea of moving away from the psychopathic character for this story. And i’m really liking her characterization so far. Not that there is too much to go on so far, but I’m liking what I’m seeing. Based on the title, it makes me think she’ll get some kind of revival power? That will somehow help make her stronger. Though I could perhaps, interpret it more unconventionally. Maybe her power is like cloning herself or something. So that her clones can repeatedly die for her. It can also be like time loop stuff. She dies and goes back some specific amount of time in to the past. I don’t know. Perhaps the title doesn’t have much bearing on the protagonist power at all. I wonder if she’ll be able to go back-and-forth between the tower and the “real” world. It kind of seems like that will be the case. Plus, it would be kind of sad if she accidentally left her mom. Assuming her mom is still alive. Kind of a small thing, but it’s something I irrationally like. Having the main character be taller than average. I feel like every story I read with a female main character. She is always on the shorter side. There are so few stories where they make the FMC just straight up tall. Granted above average could literally translate to her being an inch taller than average. Still just having FMC not be below averages is a rarity. Hope you’re having a great day, and thanks for the first chapter.


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