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[REND] B3. 2.1 - Poking Pino

🕑 Added 2026-01-24 11:24:19 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

I'm sure Deen will be happy with the "soulless" Erind body. It'll be like a doll for her.

Frozzendeth

Such a shame that she has to switch bodies(generate a new one) for this power, think of the ExD moments we could have had with them doing stuff while also sharing thoughts. Always love a good power understanding chapter or two. Keep it up

Temple (REND)

- I have some ideas for the gold liquid, but just vague ones. I haven't thought of actual scenes yet. They can't really test it on themselves or others. This can be fun. Let's put a pin on that for now. - Yeah, Myra should know about it from Kelsey, but Erind should just keep away from the puppeteering. - With more practice, they can use the Erind body well. Include it in their plans to make it seem that Pino is a different person from Red Hood. And there's Erind too, so that's 3 people. - I'll just edit the fairly long. Probably just from one end of a normal sized warehouse to the other. With more progress, it can get longer. Thanks for sharing your thoughts!

Temple (REND)

- Erind can wear knuckledusters over her growths lol. - It's like Bleach, everyone is a half this half that haha - Oh you're right about Kelsey. I'll rewrite the third eye scene. - Misunderstandings are the norm here in REND. - The formula is getting longer! - I think Kelsey should fully say that it isn't a transformation, unlike the Blanchette one. - Let's have Pino in ExD hahaha. - Thanks for sharing your thoughts and the help editing!

Temple (REND)

I think we can bring that up when they talk about the gangsters because that was Erind's Red Hood persona. As for actually hiding Kelsey, Kelsey would've told Myra it was her choice. We'll just discuss that lie at the docks, though Myra would probably think Erind was pretending to be a different person. Thanks for bringing this up!

Temple (REND)

Deen is probably fine with resisting so long as Erind pumps her with power lol.

Temple (REND)

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Temple (REND)

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Temple (REND)

Oh that's a fun title. We'll use that. Thank you!

Temple (REND)

Thanks for your support!

Cheese Bread

T4C!

No Name

"Deen sheepishly grinned. “Actually, yes.”" -> Erind can actually maintain the liquid gold... If Gabe judges it dangerous, could she use this liquid as a weapon in base form? Now I want to know if Erind can actually manipulate the flow of gold in any way other than "orb", like a constant flow if she blocks the orb from forming properly (say, by swinging her hand around). “Makes sense,” Myra said. “But what is the meaning of—?” -> Best to stop that conversation before it reaches the "puppeteering" part of the ability. My cute Erind self sat lifeless on the couch, -> I hope Erind actually learns to make use of her puppeteering ability, and especially on her own body this time. She was a third of the hallway of the upper floor when our connection was cut and the blue line disappeared. -> Unless this is a much bigger building than I got the impression of, that is not a 'fairly long' range; that is so limited it is a severe weakness. Pino, compared with the superhuman bodies of Corebring and Adums, is basically a stationary object, making her buffs basically AoE around a fixed spot. With a range this small, they could escape its effective area in a few quick jumps. Unless the Erind body is on permanent piggyback duty, carrying Pino along the fight, any enemy with a brain could just retreat a bit in open areas, rendering Pinos buffs basically useless. The fact that the connection needs to be reestablished by Pino-pointing afterwards also is an issue if enemies start playing with the range (in a sense, this is probably the biggest issue)... Also, Pino wouldn't be of much use for communication either, unless everyone is clustered together...

ARIMA Maroon

If I started to wear gloves, I should have an excuse for it. -> Clearly Erind just wants to look badass. “It might cause your seeding,” Myra said. “Some other shit. It may sound weird coming from me, but don’t risk it even if this liquid looks cool. Ah, it’s changing colors.” -> What if we get Adumbrae Deen lol? “Why was it drawn that way?” Kelsey asked. “How can you—? Ah!” -> Not sure Kelsey should be scared of the Pino mask summoning since in B2 11.3 Erind showed Kelsey her Pino mask already. Don’t make up stories about me, you bitch, I thought, irritated by the slander. I wasn’t fucking yearning for a connection. -> It is funny seeing them get it all wrong. A little bit of resistance spiced up domination. That sounded wrong. -> That sounds like a great setup for ExDxKxM “It isn’t a transformation…” Kelsey said, leaning to the side to peer at my original body behind me. -> Also because of B2 11.3, Kelsey should already know this. “George Washington ran uncontested,” Deen said, patting the head of my real body. “Don’t forget your American history, Erind. Unless you have a better suggestion? You already have a keychain of Pinocchio.” -> Imagine what Deen would do to Erind's real body with Pino somewhere else in ExD lol. She would go crazy with it. Thanks for the chappy!

Reppyxz

Shouldn’t Maya questioned Erind, lying about knowing Kelsey whereabouts? In the 2M raid Maya asked red Hood if she knew about Kelsey’s whereabouts. And red hood said yes. Maya should now understand that the timeline of events don’t lineup. Thanks for the chapter. Hope you’re having a great day or night.

Acrules

This chapter makes me sad Deen still doesn’t know that Erind is Pino in ExD

Acrules

Deen wants that cookie so effing bad

Samuel Sever

tftc

KanadianKitsune

A little bit of resistance spiced up domination. That sounded wrong. -> No no, please continue. Perhaps ask Deen about her thoughts?

Vaporus

Excellent writing, good stuff!

dtape467

may I suggest "Poking Pino"?


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