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[REND] B3. 2.3 - Poking Pino

🕑 Added 2026-01-28 23:30:36 +0000 UTC

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Temple (REND)

- The Erind chronicler lol - Yep, the organization behind Dario will definitely be interested in experimenting this. But they'll want control over the test subjects. - Lol, put the second Core on Erind's back so she can grow a tail haha. - Toxic Deen Origins - All of them are Iron Man with the reactor - Inflation Core power? hahaha - I'm still not sure if I'll continue with the Professor setting up all the groups. I'll think about it. Thanks for sharing your thoughts!

Temple (REND)

Thank you!

Temple (REND)

Eventually, the Bs will have to fight along with Blanchette when the enemy is really strong.

Temple (REND)

Possessive, even haha

Temple (REND)

Thank you!

Temple (REND)

Thank you!

Vaporus

Excellent writing, good stuff!

ARIMA Maroon

Awesome! I wish I could’ve seen that. -> Erind needs a minion that will record all her cool feats. “But what about the Dario-giving-a-Core-to-an-Adumbrae part? No way he’s going to agree to that.” Did the Fletchers think of this plan far enough? I had a sort of answer for the problem I raised. -> Maybe the professor might be interested in the results. Especially since Dario was willing to work with an Adumbrae. Unlike Kelsey’s case, there was no one to save me if it reached that point. Maybe I should try a second Core? I was game for anything that might save me. -> Maybe this Core can give more physical upgrades, like giving Blanchette's base form a tail! Myra wanted me to connect with her, but Deen wouldn’t allow it. Deen spouted stuff like protecting Myra from getting addicted to my power and that I was supposedly more comfortable connecting with her because we were best friends. That earned her weird looks from Myra. -> Deen is super jealous lol. The Core on my chest released a light show, barely dampened by my sports bra and shirt. -> Erind is now a flashlight. “Is it possible to keep my bust size when I return to normal? I’ll surely be a head turner at law school with—” -> Now I'm thinking of a Core power that gives Kelsey a bigger bust size lol. Maybe Deen and Kelsey can get into a competition. The Professor might send strong artificial Core wielders after us. -> Based off the last version, he could also make Adumbrae Corebring hybrids of his own too. Especially since we found out through Big Mark that the Professor was setting up several groups. Thanks for the chappy!

No Name

The 4Bs planned backstory has a host of suspiciously unlikely elements to them... An extremely rare group of Adumbrae who can control their minds at times. -> And the likelihood of several such individuals not just surviving, but also just stumbling into each other? Vanishingly small without an organized effort to gather them. That would require a much larger organization than what RH could possibly have available to her. Also, if their self control is intermittent, how would an organization like that even function? The likelihood of the adumbrae sticking together as well when they are in control, rather than eat each others brains, seems low. They’ve been looking for a replacement since then. -> Under these conditions, why would RH not have killed the core team on the first encounter to harvest their cores? As far as RH should have known, these were just weak corebring, ready to harvest for replacement cores. “I’m gonna go berserk that my sister is held by Red Hood,” -> Why would Myra berserk that a group with no reason to harm and the means to assist Kelseys "condition" has taken her in? Pino comes to Dario and asks for Cores to cure Kelsey, who was supposedly with Red Hood. -> Why would an organization of adumbrae who discovered a source for a possible cure just come out and reveal their target (and weakness) to an organization like the Professors? Not taking advantage of being an unrelated party to establish leverage against them first in an uninterrupted manner? Why not up their chances with a bargain or deal the Prof might actually be interested in? I’ll stop Dario. I wouldn’t want him to attack Pino, the only connection to my ‘lost’ sister. -> Why would they not use Deen? A severe warning from Deen upon Pinos appearance: "Do NOT start a fight", would have Dario think twice. If a fight does start, spoof Pinos power as being mainly manipulation, "controlling" Myra and Deen to counter the team. No viable hints to Dario that M and D may be in with Pino. We’re four smart gals -> Your lacking capacity for dastardly plotting necessitates I must insist otherwise... There is so much they need to do before they start a fight with the Professor, why are they planning the bluntest approach possible... By the time they are reasonably ready to forcibly acquire a core, deceiving Dario like this would barely be necessary anymore...

No Name

As is the case with most plans in REND, it won’t go smoothly. -> No kidding, of course this plan would fail, it is a complete mess... This chapter had me throwing endless questions at the text. The 4Bs plan is riddled with issues. And planning to steal a core at this stage seems like completely getting their priorities mixed up. The goals of the 4Bs would necessitate an organizational takeover of the pill production, or the acquisition of the precise recipe (They have to avoid any war before this, or the Professor would likely prepare to defend or purge something as critical as the local pill production) from a foe they have no information on. Yet their initial plans include a brute-force mugging, which would immediately mark their external organization (and the best fighting chance they have for escaping the hold the Professor has on them) to the Professor as an immediate enemy to focus on. Just for a single core that isn't even immediately necessary to them, when Erind can hold Keke at bay. They do not have many cards, and the enemy is a massive unknown with all the advantages, so why would they discard one of the most valuable hands they have for effectively nothing? If they want a core at this stage, it'd either have to be willingly passed over by the Prof through some deal (for which they do have options), or after they have enough hooks in the Profs organization that even if the Prof attempts to pull out or purge their assets within reach of Erinds influence, the 4Bs will retain access to what they need, and not loose track of the Profs movements.

Samuel Sever

tftc

Acrules

I wonder if Deen and Myra will get to see Boss Red Hood in full neck snapping mode, they seem to think dainty, harmless little Erind became a gang leader by accident or something (Kelsey of course already experienced Erind’s brutality first hand) I’m sure it’d be great for Deen’s paranoia about Erind getting possessed

Frozzendeth

Man Deen keeps getting more and more Protective and wierd about Erind, at least with regards to Myra

Cheese Bread

T4C!


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