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Embracing Ellie: Chapter 28

🕑 Added 2025-11-27 04:29:03 +0000 UTC

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KT Morrison

Danny is a psycho at planning. I don’t know how he came up with this so fast. but he did, and, wow, that was a huge step to take on a whim.

KT Morrison

I know what you mean, but to me the two voices in his head arrive simultaneously, overlapping; one voice correcting the other before the thought is finished, ha ha!

Bill F Protagoras

Hemi groaned into the kiss... that everyone was focussed on each for their own particular reason... what a groanworthy focal point...

Bill F Protagoras

"Your wife’s back! Your Ellie’s back!" Just a suggestion... might the omission of the second 'Your' be more expressive?

JamesIsAsleep

I love how fast it reads like Ellie got ready to keep going. Its a testament to Danny's plotting, Hemi's appeal, and of course Ellie's green flags going off this whole trip. Happy Thanksgiving!


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