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Embracing Ellie: Chapter 29

🕑 Added 2025-12-20 17:12:57 +0000 UTC

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Bill F Protagoras

Today... Merry Christmas!

Bill F Protagoras

Tidings of comfort and joy... wherever available!

Bill F Protagoras

Felices fiestas navideñas!

Bill F Protagoras

Loved Danny's fortuitously conjuring Genevieve's naughty manhood riling pic, snap or capture! All part of what the couple brought with them on holiday! Her breasts being the points of the male perspective where all inhibition could thoughtlessly vanish. Or whatever it might be that Ellie craved for Danny to see within her crushing feminine bounty.

Bill F Protagoras

The story holding its course running close to the wind... everything shipshape and Bristol fashion... especially Ellie's swaying bristols (Bristol City - cockney rhyming slang for titty).

Bill F Protagoras

"He smiled, still looking up at the ceiling, shaking his head now, showing her his best humor he could in this moment." To prune away redundancy I would suggest either changing 'his' best to 'the' best... or retaining 'his' and getting shot of the unnecessary and awkward 'he could.'

Bill F Protagoras

"Hemi snorted. Ellie’s expression flickered through a wide range." Might you be tempted by 'gamut' instead of its prosaic companion 'range.' Also more musically concise.

JamesIsAsleep

I really love how Danny reacted to seeing the image, and I especially love Ellie's reaction to Danny's reaction. Couldn't be sweeter. This my take on that, it's a beautiful example of a moment KT excels in with a couple that thinks they know what they want, but don't really know what is going to happen. Could be amazing, could be a disaster, could be a combination of the two. It's a really fun place to be as their reader.

JamesIsAsleep

There's very little I would rather experience this holiday than the mood setting lane that KT owns.


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