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Chapter 67: When the Many Become More

🕑 Added 2019-10-15 21:49:42 +0000 UTC

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Azurus Icewind

Hmm, I didn't see the original version of this chapter, but I like what I'm reading here. What happened is explained well enough through the PoV's, so no worries there, and the chapters long enough to be invested in. Anyway, heading on to the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

Xerias

honestly i kind of liked it

Thank you for the comment! I don't plan on this specific creature to have the spotlight often, mostly because of how alien it is, and I'm doing my best to keep the Aby PoV descriptive, but not exhaustive

Gabriel

I liked the chapter; too much of it I think could be bad but the odd chapter here or there will be fine. I would like to see what Aby's perspective but I think you should be careful about it being too long or in depth. Don't want to spend too much content going over the same thing.


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