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Rok Chapter: New Worries, New Goals, New Friends?

🕑 Added 2019-10-21 03:35:20 +0000 UTC

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Jacob

Thanks for the chapter

Azurus Icewind

Hmm, the mapper really has a hard time just getting to the point. That said, this chapter is well and good enough, simply because it emphasizes the mappers mental state even further. only disappointing thing here is we don't really learn anything as readers besides what it is to be titled. Looking forward to the next one though. And don't take my disappointment to heart or anything, as there's nothing to be done about it besides writing additional content about other things, which can be done with more chapters, so it's all good.

That's so good to hear, honestly! I was genuinely worried that this chapter would feel too dialogue heavy and expository, especially right after another chapter which had me worried about the same thing. I also wasn't sure how Rok's character growth would be viewed, I didn't want to seem too abrupt or too unlike him, but I also don't want him seeming too passive and too meek anymore, since he'll need to play a bigger role, with more power, sooner than later. Anyways, I'm sorry for writing a chapter in its own right as a response, just know I really appreciate the comment, and I'm so happy you read and liked!

Gabriel

I really liked this chapter. In most stories I normally want to get back to the main perspective but I really like the Rok chapters and the odd other character.


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