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Chapter 137 - Hollis

🕑 Added 2021-10-30 22:27:00 +0000 UTC

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FlawlessMovement

Wow the sheer arrogance, “more importantly MY time” your paying them to support them to write this story your not paying for this story. You need smacked lol. Sound like a child whining

Silver Beard

Side note: This chapter would have been great to add in to a 'publish volume'... if that's in your future. Could have added to a full novel; where- as to a web serial... more like filler. Word

Silver Beard

Too dis-jointed. I LIKE that you don't give everyone a full character sheet but this tossing in BS isn't going well either. Is this really necessary? Will ANY of these folks matter is 10 chapters? If not then you wasted your time and most importantly... MY time... since I'm the one paying for the privilege! Quit wasting my time already... or you'll be a bit poorer a month. Authors who waste my time get picked up every 3-4 months... gives me an option to skip this kind of BS...and still feel like a win. My patronage is yours to lose! (Your could have spent a Chapter on Raz philosphy on Death...and I would have been bummed but He IS a MC... live with that; instead we get to next dead... joy... no thanks)


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