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Chapter 164 - SpaceTek

🕑 Added 2021-11-22 00:06:00 +0000 UTC

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potatorancher

I'm pretty certain he's going to end up with one of them fairly quickly, considering Tek agreed when Serenity asked if she knew where they were and if she could send him home. The whole reason for this chapter from my perspective is to introduce the Gods, especially Tek who is most likely a brand-new God born on Earth and for Serenity to start to make use of his technology affinity. Also calm down a bit, you're stressing yourself over a single chapter like it's the first sign the story will crumble to dust instead of continuing to be good.

Scott Frederiksen

TYFTC! Loving it. Can't wait for more. 👍👍

Silver Beard

Makes the whole 'beacon' line pointless- frivolous? Already a bit miffed why does the World give you the option to draw the other 2 if it was never really going to happen no matter what?! Wonder if you are building an epic or a coffin... this is the first nail

Silver Beard

Splitting the 3 up on arrival might generate some interesting chapters; but diverting the story to others besides the MC will be viewed as filler depending on how divergent the arc. So far it's been a rare chapter... but you are now elevating these 3 into their own stories... each will take away from the other now they are in separate areas. Big gamble. Better to have had at least 1 show up with him... and have one offshoot story than do as you have done.


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