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Chapter 182 - Wasp Dungeon Interview

🕑 Added 2021-12-07 00:00:03 +0000 UTC

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Fortunis

Nope, sooooo dead. It wouldn't be hard to "accidentally" drop a plasma ball on her face. Im almost positive it would be fine.

Thanks. Yeah, I sort of think of it as the Superman problem - it's not an interesting story if there's no challenge. Having an extremely strong character changes what the available conflicts can be. I'm trying to avoid writing myself into that kind of corner; having a somewhat damaged hero seems to help with it.

buca117

I like the way you're handling his OP side. Realistically, as Death Incarnate, he could very easily bulldoze through almost all of his problems at this stage. His limited mana isn't really an issue with Death magic, as the efficiency is so high and his understanding so thorough. However, because relying on Death magic is so antithetical to his character (and for good reason), his lesser Affinities and Concepts become the bottleneck. I was reading another story on RR that had an issue taking an OP character and giving good reasons why they didn't just steamroll over all their problems. I hope you don't write yourself into any corners that his character motivations don't justify.


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