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Chapter 648 - Earth

🕑 Added 2023-02-18 23:43:18 +0000 UTC

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It's fine. Honestly I think some of this stuff has dangled for long enough; it's not like there aren't more threads running from it!

M4lk10r

The voice is very cognizant of Serenity looping, not sure if it came back with him. Honestly, not even sure Serenity came back in time, given the artifacts of Vengeance existed on Tsikara(sp), it’s seeming like it’s possible a parallel world, multiverse thing, suggesting Serenity could potentially have to face himself as the Final Reaper

potatorancher

With this reveal that the Orders Voice is only 30 million years old I have a hypothesis. With the earlier hints from when two of the gods were talking about the voice starting to act more like an individual, which coincided with Serenity being sent to the past. It probably took the voice an incredibly long time to form a true sense of self, it was probably never even meant to have the ability to make choices based on its desires. Something it did for the first time in order to save the universe from its sad fate, and now the much older awakened voice or at least part of it went back in time with Serenity.

M4lk10r

OI! All that beautiful foreshadowing last chapter and we just spill the beans!? Where’s the lingering tease, the build suspicion, the tempting of the reader with knowledge they think the know, but keeping it partially covered? WHERES THE FOREPLAY? Good job on tying up some loose threads from arc 1 and 5, you have a wonderful narrative going, I apologize for my outburst ;)


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