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Chapter 862 - A Happy Annoyance

🕑 Added 2023-09-22 21:44:25 +0000 UTC

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I always have trouble answering comments like these. To some extent they're valid; he doesn't do much digging into some things that he should (his new shape is a great example). Some others ... well, it's only been three years and they've been a very busy three years. He misses things ... and / or intends to come back and deal with them later. Beyond that, there is a definite criticism of my writing style there. I know I tend to talk about what he's been doing only when it comes up and that means it's not obvious what he's working on at the time. I'm going to have to think about that; it's definitely something I want to tweak a bit in the planned rewrite and avoid as much as I can in the next story I write. I'm not sure I can fix it for this one until the rewrite, unfortunately.

potatorancher

Getting tired of people disregarding or actively abusing Serenity and him just taking it passively, it makes sense especially in this instance since he doesn't want his friends and family to potentially get hurt, but it leads to a really unsatisfying reading experience. This leads to another gripe I have, he's supposed to be formally one of the most powerful beings to ever exist, be he barely uses any of the vast knowledge he's retained to actively try and make himself stronger or his family and friends safer. He doesn't experiment with his origin rift, he doesn't even try to learn to heal just assuming that he can't even though someone far more knowledgable than him in the healing arts keeps telling him he can. He says he cares, but for the entire story so far it feels like he's putting forth the minimum effort necessary, not really preparing for anything and only coming up with solutions for problems as they happen. I'm convinced he's MUCH more powerful than he thinks he is, but just doesn't care enough to find his limits and explore what he can do with the tools that are available to him. Vault full of powerful ancient weapons, some of which he and his loved ones can use to protect their lives, leaves them in the vault to rot like they're worthless. Gains a new powerful form that is supposedly one of the origins of demons, doesn't use it a single time after receiving it even to just find out its capabilities. Has his own rift to the origin point that he knows can create magical materials from mundane items like water and is an infinite source of potential, uses it to store food and that's it. Serenity is the very definition of the phrase pearls before swine and it makes the story really hard to for me to read. The types of protagonists I love the most are intelligent and crafty, they're motivated to learn, improve and grasp every opportunity they can since even a small advantage can mean a better outcome for themselves and those they care about. Seeing someone with so god-damn much do practically nothing with it hurts my soul, a more driven protagonist could dominate a world with just one of Serenity's advantages.

Danielle Warvel

Poor Serenity. If things like this are what he often had to deal with as Vengeance, it’s no wonder he ended up as the Final Reaper rather than any kinder being with a less grim fate.


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