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Anna's Unfaithful Life - Book 1: Beer Pong Gone Wrong

🕑 Added 2025-12-16 19:00:03 +0000 UTC

Comments

Adam Conrad

I'll finish when you republish with the dialogue fixed. Because it's hard to read as it is

DigitalArtNovel

You can read the answer I gave to Greg. Sorry about that.

DigitalArtNovel

You can read the answer I gave to Greg. Sorry about that.

DigitalArtNovel

I received a comment recently saying that my sexting dialogue was too literal and didn't feel like real texting, with awkward phrasing and some mistakes. I think I approached it the wrong way and I'm sorry about that. It was an experiment with a social media style format, but I definitely missed the mark. I usually take more time to rephrase and polish everything, but this time I published a rougher version thinking it would feel more realistic. That was a mistake. I'll take a few days to fix it and republish it with dialogue that feels more natural, like I usually do.

Rob Gee

I agree. The writing on this one is terrible and it takes away from the enjoyment.

Drew

I just started this and I agree with Greg. So far the English is terrible. I haven't noticed this before from your stories. Much less enjoyable to read. What changed?

Gavin R.

Honestly was loving Elias's fighting back at first. Like dude, set boundaries and if she doesn't respect them she doesn't respect you. Simple as that. LOVED the idea that she doesn't remember what happened in the end, makes you wonder if he'll tell her or not. Like he 100% should to stop any future situations like thay arising. Probably just wants to ignore and forget it all tho.