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Yunyun // Konosuba! ( Page )
🕑 Added 2022-01-13 05:50:45 +0000 UTCLOL...I genuinely almost forgot I was working on this...(≧▽≦)U
But don't get me wrong, it's not about Wiz and Yunyun being unimportant characters. I believe that Yunyun plays a very important role in supporting Megumin's development.
And in fact I consider that they are already friends, it's just that Yunyun is a bit slow to catch the memo...
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Wiz herself plays an important role in the story and has a lot of screen time, so calling her a supporting character is better than just calling her a background character...
I wanted to add a little piece where Wiz is happy that Yunyun is no longer roaming around the store. Her gloomy face as she spends the day obsessing over Megumin drives away customers and she does nothing more than buy cheap cups of tea, so all in all she is bad for business...(´ー` )┌
Talking about the density of information on the page I think I did well this time, I almost managed to do a 4koma but decided to divide the first panel into 2 scenes.
A Manga needs panels but you have to know how many of them you really need since they affect the speed and weight of each page.
For a one-page story I don't think it's bad to saturate things a bit but I also like to think of these pages as if they were already part of a longer story. In this way I try to avoid overdoing things or spending too much time on just one part of the project. (Although the project itself is this one page)
Comments
Virus. G
Siempre es el callejón sucio detrás de la taberna...(￢‿￢ )✧ Para lo que sea, negocios turbios, peleas de gallos, encuentros casuales o todo a la misma vez...!
Sal Emb
Quien sabe a que "club de amigos" se metió, pero me gustaría saber la dirección.
Virus. G
As for the dialogues I am OK if they are terrible, these are ideas thought in 5 minutes or so. Although I'm really not sure I can do better even if I spend much more time on them....XDDD My focus for now is studying framing, posing, inking and lettering... I also read a lot of different things (talking about hentai in this case) and I constantly find myself enjoying the work of artists with good drawing but lousy narrative and vice versa. If at least one of these elements catches my attention I stay for a good read. My aim is to achieve a good economy between time, effort, aesthetics and readability... 🤓
Rocky-Ace
Yunyun looks great, I'm sure she's going to make a bunch of new friends. :D Great job on the page as well, from the framing to the layout, tones, and dialogue, they all have a nice read and look to them, better than a lot of manga I read.
