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Uzaki-chan // Full Draft: Pages 01-10 (Sketch)
🕑 Added 2023-02-09 04:56:30 +0000 UTCHey people...(・∀・)ﾉ
The rough draft for the doujinshi is finally done...!!!
I decided to fast forward the last two pages so you guys can have a better pilot read.
Please point out any glaring errors or small details you find. I already read it 50 times, but fresh eyes are sharper... 👀✨
I still have a lot of polishing and organizing to do before jumping into the inking process, but I'm somewhat happy with what I have so far.
10 pages was definitely too short, there are a lot of establishing shots and extra pages that I wish I could have included, but I tried to be careful and not overextend. The story is a bit bare bones but well condensed and action packed, so at least I did everything I set out to do.
I hope you enjoy it...!
Thanks for all the support... 👍✨
Comments
Virus. G
That's good enough... 👍✨ Thanks for taking the time to give it a look. I will do my best to push the work forward with style...!
Rocky-Ace
It's a lot of information to go over, but I haven't noticed any glaring issues at hand. This is gonna be great!
