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[Look To The Stars] Chapter 55: The Summer King's Twilight
🕑 Added 2026-01-26 23:57:38 +0000 UTCDisclaimer: This is a work of fiction and all rights for character, plots and settings belong to GRRM and George Lucas/Disney. I have no ownership.
A/N: Originally I wanted to split this chapter into two parts (though I would post it back to back) since it's so long but some folks from the discord convinced me to post it as a giant chapter. This was a difficult one to write so I hope you enjoy the chapter! :D
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Year 299 AC/8 ABY
Storm's End, The Stormlands
The morning sun hung pale and watery above Storm's End, its light barely strong enough to burn through the mist that clung to the fields between the two armies. Jon rode at Renly's right hand, positioned there deliberately, visibly, where both hosts could see the grey direwolf banner snapping beside the crowned stag of House Baratheon.
The North rides with me.
Renly hadn't said the words aloud. He didn't need to. The placement spoke louder than any herald's cry. Jon was a piece on the board, moved into position for maximum effect.
Ghost padded alongside Jon's horse, his white fur stark against the muddy grass. The direwolf's hackles were raised, his red eyes tracking something Jon couldn't see. Every few strides, Ghost would snap at the empty air, teeth clicking together with a sound like bone striking bone.
The pressure began behind Jon's eyes before they'd gone fifty yards.
It started as a dull ache, the kind that came with too little sleep or too much wine. But it spread quickly, sinking into his jaw, settling into his teeth like he'd bitten down on ice. His skull felt too tight for his brain. The sensation was familiar in a way that made his stomach clench. He'd felt something like this beyond the Wall in his visions, in the moments when the Force whispered of things that should not be.
"Your wolf is restless," Jory observed quietly, bringing his mount closer to Jon's flank. The captain of guards had aged ten years since leaving with him on this journey, lines carved deep around his eyes. "Been like that since we broke camp."
"He senses something." Jon kept his voice low. "I don't know what."
Ghost snapped again, this time at a shadow that seemed to flicker at the edge of Jon's vision. When Jon turned his head, there was nothing there but trampled grass and morning mist.
Jory's hand drifted to his sword hilt. "The men are talking. Saying it's an omen. Bad luck to parley with a wolf that won't settle."
"Let them talk." Jon's jaw ached with the cold that had nothing to do with the weather. The sun was warm on his face, but something beneath his skin had turned to winter. "Stay close to me, Jory. Whatever happens."
The captain nodded, falling into position at Jon's shoulder.
Renly rode ahead, resplendent in green and gold armor that caught the weak sunlight and threw it back in dazzling patterns. He'd chosen his wardrobe for this moment the way a mummer chose his costume. Every inch of him proclaimed king, from the antlered helm tucked under his arm to the cloth-of-gold cloak that billowed behind him like captured sunlight.
The parley ground had been marked out with banners the night before. A strip of neutral earth between the two hosts, where neither army could claim advantage. Stannis's men waited on the far side, a grim line of steel beneath the flaming heart of R'hllor.
And there, at their center, Stannis Baratheon sat his horse like judgment given flesh.
Where Renly was summer, Stannis was winter. He wore no crown, bore no gold. His armor was plain grey steel, functional and unadorned. His face might have been carved from the same stone as Storm's End itself, all hard angles and bitter lines, a mouth that had forgotten how to smile. Even from this distance, Jon could see the grinding of his jaw, the clenched set of his shoulders.
But it wasn't Stannis who made the cold in Jon's bones turn to ice.
The woman beside him wore red.
Red robes that seemed to drink the morning light. Red hair that fell past her shoulders like spilled blood. Red gems at her throat that pulsed with a light of their own, steady as a heartbeat. She sat her horse with the stillness of a corpse, and when her eyes found Jon across the field, the pressure behind his eyes became a spike of pure agony.
Jon's vision swam. His stomach heaved. For a terrible moment, he thought he might vomit right there in front of both armies.
Wrong. Wrong. Wrong.
The word pulsed through him with every beat of his heart. Everything about that woman was wrong. The Force screamed at him to run, to draw his sword, to do something, but all he could do was grip his reins and force his breathing to remain steady.
Ghost's growl had become constant now.
"Steady, boy," Jon whispered. Whether to the wolf or to himself, he couldn't say.
They reached the parley ground. Renly reined in with practiced grace, his smile wide and easy, the smile of a man who'd already won and was simply waiting for the world to acknowledge it. His Rainbow Guard spread out behind him with Loras in his silver armor, Brienne towering over the others in her plain steel, a half-dozen knights in their colorful cloaks.
Stannis's party approached from the opposite side. Davos Seaworth rode at his lord's left hand, his weathered face creased with worry. The red woman glided forward on a pale mare, her movements too smooth, too fluid. And behind them, a handful of men in the armor of the queen's men, their surcoats blazoned with the burning heart.
The two brothers stopped ten feet apart. The silence stretched, thick and heavy as the morning mist.
Renly broke it first. Of course he did.
"Brother!" His voice rang across the field, pitched to carry to both armies. "You look well. Though I must say, the company you keep has declined since last we met." He gestured lazily toward the red woman. "I thought you despised the faith of the Seven, but I never imagined you'd trade it for foreign fire worship. Tell me, does she make you burn incense? Chant prayers to her eastern god?"
Laughter rippled through the Tyrell ranks. Renly had rehearsed this, Jon realized. Every word, every gesture, chosen for the audience watching from the hills.
Stannis's jaw worked. "You are not fit to speak of faith. You, who would steal a crown that is not yours by right."
"Steal?" Renly's smile widened. "I have eighty thousand swords, brother. If that is stealing, then the thief wears the crown better than the honest man."
More laughter. Louder this time.
Jon watched the exchange with growing unease. This wasn't a negotiation. This was a performance. Renly was playing to his men, reinforcing their confidence, making Stannis look like a bitter old man raging against the inevitable. Every jest, every barb, every casual dismissal was a weapon.
And Stannis knew it. Jon could see the fury building behind those cold eyes, the humiliation of being mocked in front of his own host.
"The Iron Throne is mine by right," Stannis said, his voice flat and hard as a blade. "Robert was my brother. Joffrey is no true king. He is a bastard born of incest, a pretender seated on stolen power. You know this as well as I do."
"What I know," Renly replied, reaching into his saddlebag, "is that you have perhaps five thousand men on a rock, while I have the might of the Reach and the Stormlands at my back." He produced a peach, its skin flushed pink and gold. He bit into it, juice running down his chin. "Would you like a peach, Stannis? They're quite good this time of year."
The insult landed like a slap. Stannis's face went pale, then red. His hand tightened on his reins until the leather creaked.
Davos Seaworth cleared his throat. "Your Grace. My lord." His voice was rough, the accent of Flea Bottom still clinging to his words despite years of service. "Perhaps we might speak of terms. There has been enough blood in this realm. Enough widows made, enough children orphaned. Surely brothers can find common ground."
"There is no common ground," Stannis said coldly. "Only the ground where traitors kneel or die."
Renly laughed. "Traitors! You wound me, brother. I merely give the people what they want. A king they can love. A king who smiles. When was the last time you smiled, Stannis? When you ground your teeth so hard they cracked?"
The red woman spoke for the first time.
"Mock as you will, Lord Renly." Her voice was silk and smoke, carrying across the field without effort. "The night is dark and full of terrors. Dawn comes for all men. Some will greet it. Others will burn."
The cold in Jon's bones turned to fire. His vision flickered, and for a heartbeat he saw something else superimposed over the parley ground. Shadow. Darkness. A shape that was not a shape, sliding through the world like oil through water.
He blinked, and it was gone.
Ghost snapped at empty air again. His growl had become a snarl.
Renly waved a dismissive hand. "Save your prophecies for those who believe in them, my lady. I put my faith in steel and gold, not smoke and mirrors."
"Then you are a fool," Stannis said. "And fools die screaming."
The parley had turned. Jon could feel it, the way you could feel a storm approaching before the first clouds appeared. Something had shifted in Stannis's bearing. The bitter resentment remained, but beneath it now lay something else. Certainty. The cold certainty of a man holding a blade his enemy couldn't see.
"But perhaps," Stannis continued, his voice dropping to a tone that somehow carried further than his shouts, "you have greater concerns than my claim. Tell me, Renly. How well do you know your allies?"
Renly's smile faltered. Just for a moment. Just enough for Jon to notice.
"What game are you playing now, brother?"
Stannis turned his gaze to Jon.
The weight of that stare was physical. Jon felt it press against him, cold and heavy as a stone placed upon his chest. Stannis's eyes were pale blue, almost grey, and utterly without warmth. They measured Jon the way a butcher measured a carcass.
"You are Eddard Stark's son," Stannis said. It was not a question.
"I am." Jon kept his voice steady. "Jon Snow."
"The bastard." Stannis's lip curled. "Tell me, where is your father now?"
The question hung in the air. Jon felt the attention of both armies shifting toward him, all of eyes suddenly focused on a single point. His throat tightened. He had known. That was the problem.
"He holds the North," Jon said carefully. "As he has always done."
"Does he?" Stannis reached into his cloak and produced a rolled parchment. "My men intercepted a raven three days past. From White Harbor. Shall I read it aloud, or would you prefer to spare yourself the humiliation?"
Jon's blood turned to ice. He was not surprised. He was afraid. If Stannis truly had proof, then Jon had to survive the next breath without giving himself away.
"What is this?" Renly demanded. The playfulness had vanished from his voice. "Stannis, if you have something to say, say it plainly."
Stannis smiled. It was a terrible expression, all teeth and bitter triumph.
"Eddard Stark has declared for Daenerys Targaryen," he announced, his voice carrying across the field like a death knell. "He fights for her in the Riverlands as we speak. He has raised his banners for the Dragon Queen… and has revealed her dragons to his lords."
Silence.
Complete, absolute silence.
Jon made his face obey. He let his eyes widen. He let the word dragons hit like it was new, because it had to.
Renly's head turned slowly toward Jon. The calculation in those eyes was naked now, stripped of all pretense. He was no longer looking at an ally. He was looking at a threat. A liability. A piece that had suddenly revealed itself to be on a different board entirely.
"Is this true?" Renly's voice was soft. Dangerous.
Jon swallowed. He chose words that were true enough to carry and vague enough to live.
"I have had no word of this," Jon said. "If my father has done it, he did not tell me." He forced himself to lift his chin. "If it is true, then he believes he must."
"Your father is a Stark," Stannis cut in. "And Starks serve themselves first. Always have. Always will. Your father's honor is a mask he wears for the realm. Beneath it, he is no different from any other lord. He sees the wind changing and bends with it."
"That's not true."
"Isn't it?" Stannis held up the parchment. "This letter speaks of dragons. Of Targaryen restoration. Of the North pledging itself to a foreign conqueror. Your father has made his choice, bastard. The question is whether you share it."
Jon drew a slow breath. Denial would only tighten the snare. He had to change the shape of the argument.
"If there are living dragons," Jon said, careful to make it sound like a thought, "then this war is smaller than you both pretend."
He looked from one brother to the other.
"A queen with dragons does not need our banners if the realm destroys itself first. If you truly have proof, Stannis, take it to counsel. Let it be weighed in a room, not shouted across a field." Jon kept his voice steady. "And if it is true, then talk. You can still fight later. You cannot unsay dragons once you have made men afraid."
For a heartbeat, Renly looked shaken. Then his mouth hardened. Stannis’s eyes narrowed, as if Jon had confirmed something by accident.
"I am talking," Stannis said. "Bend the knee. Unite the realm under its rightful king. That is how you face dragons." Renly’s laugh came out thin. "You would have me kneel because you have found a new monster to fear?"
The parley was over. Jon knew it even before Renly spoke.
"We will discuss this matter privately," Renly said, his voice clipped and cold. "This parley is concluded. Stannis, you have until dawn to surrender or retreat. After that, I will crush you like the obstinate fool you are."
He wheeled his horse without waiting for a response, the cloth-of-gold cloak swirling behind him. The Rainbow Guard fell in around him, and Jon found himself swept along in the retreat, unable to do anything but follow.
Renly turned in to speak with a captain riding at his flank. The words were quiet, meant for the man's ears alone. But Jon heard them anyway, the Force carrying them to him like whispers on a winter wind.
"The Stark party. Secure them. Disarm them. Do it quietly. I want no scenes."
The captain nodded and spurred his horse forward, vanishing into the column.
The ride back to the Reach camp passed in a blur. Jon was aware of Jory staying close, of Ghost's constant snarl, of the sidelong glances from the knights around him. But mostly he was aware of the cold. It had intensified during the parley, settling into his bones like frost into stone. Something was hunting him. Something he couldn't see, couldn't name, couldn't fight.
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The camp was a powder keg waiting for a spark.
Leia stood at the edge of the Stark encampment, her hand resting on her stomach where the twins had finally settled into an uneasy sleep. The parley had been going on for over an hour. She could feel the tension radiating from the distant ridge where the banners of the stag and the flaming heart faced each other across the open ground.
Something was wrong. She did not need the Force to tell her that. She could read it in the rigid spines of the Tyrell guards patrolling the perimeter.
Han paced beside her, his boots wearing a track in the trampled grass. He had that look she knew too well: the coiled energy of a man who wanted to hit something but had no clear target.
"This is taking too long," he muttered.
"Parleys take time." Leia kept her voice level, though she shared his unease. "Negotiations between stubborn men always do."
"These aren't negotiations. This is two brothers measuring each other for coffins." Han stopped pacing. His eyes swept the camp, cataloging threats the way he had cataloged exits in every cantina from Nar Shaddaa to Tatooine. "I don't like this. We're sitting in the open with no extraction plan and no backup."
Behind them, Chewbacca stood like a statue of rusted iron. The battered helm obscured his face, and the heavy cloak draped his massive frame. He had positioned himself carefully, half-hidden behind one of the Stark guards, a young man named Wyl who looked barely old enough to grow a beard. Alyn, the other guard, stood at the front of their small cluster, his hand resting on his sword pommel.
Samwell Tarly sat on a camp stool near the supply wagon, a heavy leather-bound tome balanced on his knees. He was staring at the open pages, but his eyes were not tracking the ink. Every few seconds he would turn a page, only to flip it back a moment later, his fingers trembling. He was trying to lose himself in the words, but the silence from the ridge was too loud. Leia could feel his anxiety bleeding into the Force like heat from an open flame.
Archmaester Marwyn stood apart from the group, arms folded across his barrel chest. He was not afraid. He was observing. His dark eyes moved from soldier to soldier, tracking the currents of emotion that rippled through the camp. He chewed his sourleaf with the mechanical rhythm of a man cataloging data for later analysis.
Han pulled the comlink from his belt. He had concealed it in a leather pouch that passed for a coin purse, but Leia knew what he was doing.
"Han. Not here."
"Just checking in." He angled his body away from the nearest patrol and thumbed the frequency. "Artoo, you there? Come in."
A beat of nothing. Then the comlink clicked, and a familiar tinny whistle answered.
Han exhaled hard, relief and irritation tangled together. "There you are." He lowered his voice. "Patch us through to Luke. Now."
R2 chirped a sharp response that sounded like an argument. The comlink hissed, then cleared for half a second into an empty channel.
Han leaned in. "Luke? You there?"
Nothing answered but a low wash of noise.
R2 beeped again, faster this time, and tried a second relay.
Han’s jaw tightened. "Come on. You can hear me. Get it to him."
R2 let out a strained warble that needed no translation. He could take Han’s call. He could not throw it any farther. Whatever sat between here and Luke swallowed the signal whole.
Leia stepped closer, putting her body between Han and the camp. "Stop. You got through to Artoo. That is something. For now it has to be enough."
Han stared at the comlink like he could force it to obey. Then he shoved it back into the pouch with more force than necessary. "Fine. But when this goes sideways, don't say I didn't try."
"If this goes sideways, we adapt. That's what we do." Leia turned back toward the ridge where the parley continued. The banners had not moved. The distant figures remained locked in their positions. But something in the Force was shifting, a pressure building like storm clouds on a distant horizon.
She did not have to wait long for it to break.
A Baratheon captain came with twenty men at his back. He was a thick-necked knight with the crowned stag blazoned on his surcoat and a face built for shouting orders. His men spread out as they approached, forming a loose cordon around the Stark encampment. Their hands rested on sword hilts. Their eyes were hard.
"By order of King Renly," the captain bellowed, his voice pitched to carry across the camp, "surrender your arms and submit to containment."
Han's hand moved toward his hip. Leia caught his wrist before he could reach the blaster.
"Don't." Her voice was barely a whisper. "Not yet."
"Stark banners fly for the Dragon Queen," the captain continued, louder now. Other soldiers were stopping to listen. Servants. Squires. Knights in green and gold and black and yellow. The audience was growing by the second. "Traitors cannot be left free to move among loyal men."
Sam made a small, strangled sound. Marwyn's chewing slowed.
"Your bastard spoke of dragons on the parley ground," the captain added, and there was satisfaction in his voice now. He was not just delivering orders. He was spreading poison. "Spoke of counsel and caution. This is how traitors soften a host before the knife goes in."
The accusation landed like a stone thrown into still water. Leia felt the ripples spread through the watching crowd. Fear. Suspicion. The ugly hunger of men looking for someone to blame.
Alyn stepped forward, his young face flushed with anger. "Jon Snow is no traitor. He rode with King Renly to the parley as a loyal man."
"The bastard's father has declared for the Targaryen pretender." The captain cut him off with a dismissive gesture. "Blood tells. Now submit, Northman, or die."
Wyl reached for his sword. Alyn grabbed his arm, holding him back.
Leia's mind raced through options. Resistance would confirm the accusation. Surrender would leave them defenseless. They needed a third path, something that would buy time without escalating the confrontation.
Before she could act, new voices joined the chaos.
"Hold!" A Tyrell captain pushed through the growing crowd, his green cloak billowing behind him. Six men in Reach livery followed at his heels. "This is Tyrell ground. You have no authority here."
The Baratheon captain turned, his lip curling. "I carry the King's order."
"And I carry Lady Olenna's instruction." The Tyrell captain planted himself between the stormlanders and the Stark party. "No guests are to be seized by force in Reach-controlled lines. If you have grievance, take it to the pavilion."
"Guests?" The Baratheon captain spat the word like a curse. "They are traitors and spies."
"They are under Tyrell protection until the King says otherwise. In person. To Lady Olenna."
The two captains faced each other across six feet of trampled grass. Their men shifted behind them, hands tightening on weapons. Leia could feel the violence building in the air, a pressure that needed only the slightest push to explode.
Movement at the edge of her vision. Margaery Tyrell stood near the entrance to a green silk pavilion, flanked by handmaidens and guards. Her face was pale, her lips pressed into a thin line. She was watching the confrontation with the fixed intensity of someone witnessing a disaster unfold.
Lady Olenna stood a little behind her, cane planted in the mud, eyes sharp and busy.
Margaery stepped forward into the open, voice carrying with a practiced steadiness. "Stand down. All of you."
The Baratheon captain snapped his head toward her. "My Queen, I can—"
"Yes, I am the queen," Margaery said, and the word made several Reachmen straighten as if a cord had been pulled tight. "And as Queen, I order you to not spill blood in my husband's camp."
The Baratheon captain’s mouth tightened. "The king gave this order to me himself. His voice outranks yours in this, Your Grace. He will want them detained before they run."
Margaery’s hands clenched once at her sides. Leia saw it, small and controlled. Anger, but not at Leia. Anger at how fast this had become public.
Olenna’s cane tapped once, a quiet signal. The Tyrell captain did not move aside. If anything, he planted his feet harder.
"We are wasting time." The Baratheon captain turned to his men. "Take them."
The stormlanders surged forward. The Tyrell men interposed, spearpoints lowering. Captains shouted over each other. Men shoved. For a few seconds it held.
Then a shield slammed into a Reachman’s chest and the line buckled. Not broken, but bent. Bodies spilled through the gap.
Han took one step forward, palms out, voice loud enough for the nearest men to hear. He wore the crooked swagger-smile he used in bad places, the one that tried to turn danger into a joke.
"Easy," Han called. "We are all friends here, we can solve this with a few words."
A stormlander soldier lunged for Han. The soldier’s gauntlet closed around Han’s jerkin and yanked him off balance.
Leia’s breath caught. "Han!"
Han swore, his smile dropping. His hand moved toward the pouch at his belt and Wyl, panicking, half-stepped forward as if he could help, then froze when steel flashed on both sides.
Chewbacca moved.
It was one heavy step, and suddenly the cloaked giant was in front of Han, blocking him from the soldier like a door slammed shut. The stormlander looked up, and his courage faltered for half a heartbeat.
That half heartbeat was all fear needed.
Three men piled in at once. They did not try to fight him. They tried to drag him down. One hooked an arm around Chewbacca’s waist. One grabbed at the cloak. One slammed a shoulder into his chest.
The cloak tore. The battered helm jerked sideways.
Leia lunged forward. "Stop! Get back!"
A gauntlet snagged the helm strap as it slipped. Someone pulled without meaning to. The leather snapped with a sharp crack.
The helm tilted, hung for a heartbeat, then dropped into the mud.
Chewbacca's face was exposed. The broad, fur-covered visage. The blue eyes. The fanged muzzle.
Alyn went rigid, then lifted his sword an inch as if he did not know what else to do. Wyl’s mouth fell open. Both of them had lived with the helmet and the cloak. Neither had been ready for the truth.
Margaery made a small sound, the kind she would have strangled in a court. Her eyes went to Chewbacca’s face, then to Leia, as if trying to confirm reality.
Olenna’s expression did not crack into fear, but her fingers tightened around her cane as she took several steps back. Her gaze cut to her captains, then to the Baratheon men, then back to Chewbacca. Calculations, fast and cold.
For a heartbeat, no one moved. The three men on him froze like they had tackled a nightmare and only just realized it.
Then Chewbacca roared.
It was not a battle cry. It was a sound of frustration and warning, the instinctive vocalization of a Wookiee who had been grabbed by a stranger. But to the men around him, it was something else entirely. It was the howl of a demon summoned from the seven hells.
The soldier who had grabbed Han screamed. He stumbled backward, tripped over his own feet, crashed into two of his companions. Panic rippled outward like a shockwave.
"DEMON!" someone shrieked. "SORCERY! THE NORTHMEN BROUGHT A MONSTER!"
The Baratheon line broke. Men scattered, some drawing swords, others simply running. The Tyrell soldiers held their ground, but their faces had gone pale. Even disciplined men hesitated when confronted with a nightmare made flesh.
A crossbowman fired from somewhere inside the crush, more reflex than intent. Leia felt the bolt cut the air and shoved with the Force without thinking. The shaft twitched sideways and slammed into the supply wagon with a hard thunk, close enough that splinters jumped.
Han's blaster was in his hand before Leia could stop him. He did not fire. He raised it, pointing at the sky, a warning rather than an attack. "Nobody move! Next one who shoots answers to me!"
But the camp was beyond warnings. More shouts. More running. Leia saw a Baratheon archer nocking another bolt, his hands shaking so badly he nearly dropped the arrow.
Leia stepped toward him, keeping her shoulders square and her voice steady. She let the Force brush her words, just enough to help them land.
"You will lower that."
The archer hesitated. His eyes were wide with terror, but something in her voice reached him. The bow wavered.
"He is not a demon." Leia held his gaze, projecting calm she did not feel. "He is a man from a distant land. Strange in appearance, yes. But a man. Lower your weapon."
The bow dropped. The archer stumbled backward, his nerve broken.
A horn sounded again, closer now. The sound rolled across the camp like a warning bell.
Hoofbeats thundered from the direction of the parley ground. The King's column was returning. Leia caught a glimpse of Renly's antlered helm at the head of the riders, his face twisted with fury.
Renly cut a hard line straight for the royal pavilion, as if the camp around him did not exist.
Jon was there among the returning riders, but not as a companion. Two armored men rode tight to him, close enough that their knees nearly brushed his horse. One kept a hand near Jon’s reins, ready to pull.
More soldiers converged anyway. Tyrell and Baratheon alike, their earlier conflict forgotten in the face of a common enemy. Hands grabbed at the Stark guards. Alyn went down under three men. Wyl was shoved against the wagon, his sword torn from his grasp.
Sam’s breath hitched. He pressed his face into his satchel as if he could disappear into leather and ink.
Marwyn’s eyes tracked Chewbacca like a maester watching a comet. Awe, fear, and something close to triumph all mixed together.
A rider peeled off from the returning column and slammed to a stop near the Baratheon captain, shouting the words that mattered. "By order of King Renly, take them now!"
The Baratheon captain’s face changed at once. Whatever caution had been left in him burned away. "You heard the King!" he roared. "Bind them! All of them!"
Ahead, near the pavilion, Jon was pulled from his saddle in a tight churn of bodies. Leia could not hear the words, but she saw the shape of it. A knight seized Jon’s arm. Another reached for his sword belt. Jon’s shoulders went rigid, then he unbuckled the belt and handed it over.
Jon was hauled after him by two guards, one on each side, hands locked on his arms. The tent flap swallowed Renly first, then Jon, then the men holding him.
Margaery saw it too. Her composure cracked into motion. She lifted her skirts and moved fast toward the royal pavilion, her handmaidens scrambling after her.
Olenna remained behind, her voice cutting through the chaos as she directed her captains. "Hold the line! No one strikes the first blow! This is Tyrell ground!"
The standoff was freezing into something stable but fragile. Stormlanders and Reach men glared at each other across an invisible boundary. The Stark party stood at the center, trapped.
Then a new voice joined the chaos.
"What entertainment!" Prince Oberyn Martell rode into the clearing with forty Dornish spears at his back. He was smiling, but his eyes were the eyes of a viper sizing up its prey. "I leave for one hour, and the Reach descends into farce."
Sarella Sand appeared at his stirrup. Leia had not seen her move. The young woman spoke rapidly in a language Leia did not understand, her hands gesturing toward the Stark party, toward Chewbacca, toward the distant pavilion where Jon had been taken.
Oberyn's smile did not waver, but something shifted behind his eyes.
"Enough." He raised his hand, and his spears formed a wedge, pushing into the space between the factions. "These people are guests of the host. Dornish law recognizes guest right, even when Reach and Storm forget their courtesies."
"This is not Dorne," the Baratheon captain snarled.
"No. It is not." Oberyn's voice dropped to something soft and dangerous. "But I am Dornish. And I will not stand by while men are butchered in violation of every law of hospitality. You may explain to King Renly why he wishes to add Dorne to his list of enemies. Or you may step aside."
The captain hesitated. Looked at the Dornish spears. Looked at his own scattered, shaken men. Looked at the Tyrell soldiers still holding their line.
He stepped aside.
Oberyn nodded. "Wise." He turned to Leia. "My lady. My lord. Your... companion. You will come with me. You are under Dornish protection now."
Han's blaster was still in his hand. "And if we don't want your protection?"
"Then you may stay here and be torn apart by frightened children playing at war." Oberyn's smile widened. "Choose quickly. My patience has limits."
Leia made the decision. She touched Han's arm. "Lower it. We go with him."
Han looked at her. Looked at the Dornish spears. Looked at the chaos still roiling around them. He holstered the blaster.
The Dornish spears formed a corridor around them, a wall of steel that neither Baratheon nor Tyrell dared breach.
Oberyn led them toward the Dornish encampment on the eastern edge of the camp. Behind them, the shouting continued. The accusations. The fear.
Leia looked back once. She saw Olenna Tyrell finally moving toward the royal pavilion, her cane tapping against the trampled grass. She saw riders breaking away near the parley banners, not close enough to count faces, but close enough to know which direction the news would run. She saw the chaos she and her family had inadvertently caused.
We will get through this. We always do.
But as she walked into the Dornish camp, surrounded by spears and strangers, she could not shake the feeling that the spark had finally found the powder.
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The guards did not ask or explain. They simply took him.
They hauled Jon down before his boots had properly found the mud, hands clamping onto his arms as if he might vanish. Two men seized Jon's arms, their grip hard enough to bruise through the leather of his sleeves. A third unbuckled his sword belt with practiced efficiency, yanking it free before Jon could think to resist. The steel whispered against the scabbard as it left his hip, and the absence of its weight felt like a missing limb.
"This way, Lord Snow." The captain's voice carried no inflection. Just obedience.
Jon did not struggle. He had seen how Renly looked at him during the ride back from the parley. The calculation. The cold reassessment of value. Fighting now would only give them an excuse.
Ghost snarled and lunged as they dragged Jon toward the royal pavilion. The direwolf's teeth snapped inches from a guardsman's thigh, and the man stumbled backward with a yelp that drew uneasy noise from those watching. But more guards closed in, spears lowered, forming a wall of steel between wolf and master.
"Ghost." Jon's voice came out steadier than he felt. "Stay."
The direwolf froze. His red eyes burned with something that might have been betrayal. A low whine built in his throat, mournful and questioning.
"Stay," Jon repeated. “Guard the entrance.”
He didn't know if that was true. But Ghost needed to believe it.
The guards half-marched, half-dragged him through the entrance of Renly's pavilion. The heavy canvas fell shut behind him, cutting off the sounds of the camp, the blur of banners, and Jory’s set, helpless face.
The interior was warm. Braziers burned in the corners, filling the air with heat and the scent of scented oil. Silk hangings in green and gold covered the canvas walls. A campaign table dominated the center of the space, covered with maps and wine goblets and the scattered remnants of a breakfast no one had finished.
Renly Baratheon stood behind the table, still wearing his armor, the antlered helm resting on a chair beside him. He was already inside, already settled into command, as if the camp outside was an annoyance he could fold shut with the flap. His face had lost all trace of the easy charm he wore like a second skin. What remained was something that reminded Jon, uncomfortably, of Stannis.
Brienne of Tarth stood at Renly's right shoulder. Her hand rested on her sword hilt, and her eyes tracked Jon with the intensity of a hunting dog that had caught a scent. She did not look at him like a friend. She looked at him like a problem that might turn into blood.
Loras Tyrell had positioned himself near the entrance, cutting off any retreat. The Knight of Flowers was pale, his pretty features twisted with an emotion Jon couldn't quite name. Anger, yes. And a tight, frantic edge that made his breathing sound too loud in the quiet.
Renly did not speak to Jon at once. He spoke to the captain who had delivered him.
“Outside,” Renly said, voice low. “Report.”
“The Stark camp is no longer in our cordon, Your Grace,” the captain answered. “Tyrell men tried to bar us. The queen ordered a stand down. There was shouting. A bolt was loosed, but it struck no one.”
Renly’s eyes flicked, sharp and bright.
“A bolt.”
“Panic, Your Grace. Men saw something they did not understand.” The captain hesitated. “Then Prince Oberyn arrived with Dornish spears. He claimed guest right and took the Stark party into Dornish lines. He says they are under his protection. Our men did not press.”
A flash of irritation cut through Renly’s control. “Oberyn does not command my camp.”
“No, Your Grace. But he brought enough spears to make the point.”
Renly’s mouth tightened. “Enough. Leave us.”
They released Jon's arms and withdrew. The tent flap fell closed behind them. Jon stood alone in the center of the pavilion, unarmed, surrounded by people who had been his allies an hour ago.
The silence stretched. Jon could hear his own heartbeat, too fast, too loud. He could hear Ghost outside, pacing, claws scraping against packed earth.
Renly spoke first. His voice was calm. Measured. The voice of a king delivering judgment.
"Your party nearly started a riot in my camp."
Jon said nothing. There was nothing to say that wouldn't make things worse.
Renly’s fingers tapped the edge of the table once. “I gave an order to secure your people quietly.” He held Jon’s gaze. “Quiet did not happen. Now the Dornish have wrapped your kin in guest right, and my men look like fools for letting it happen.”
"They are not my friends." The words came out before Jon could stop them. "They are my kin."
"Your kin." Renly's smile had no warmth. “Convenient kin, Lord Snow. Convenient timing.” "Tell me, Lord Snow. Do you take me for a fool?"
"No, Your Grace."
"Then why do you lie to me like one?"
Jon kept his face still. He had learned that much, at least. When you had nothing to give, you gave nothing away.
Renly circled the table, his movements slow and deliberate. He stopped three feet from Jon, close enough that Jon could see the gold flecks in his green eyes.
"On my parley ground," Renly said, "you spoke of dragons and counsel. You urged talk when my brother named your father a traitor. You tried to slow my hand in front of both hosts." He tilted his head, studying Jon like a curiosity. "Why?"
"Because panic breaks armies." Jon's voice came out flat. Steady. "Because eighty thousand men are useless if they turn on each other. Because dragons change everything, and a war between brothers becomes irrelevant if a dragon-backed claimant is real."
"Irrelevant." Renly's jaw tightened. "You think my war is irrelevant."
"I think the dead care nothing for your war."
Jon hadn't meant to say it. But it was true, and truth had weight.
Brienne shifted, her armor creaking. Loras took a half-step forward, his hand moving toward his sword. But Renly raised one finger, and both of them froze.
"The dead," Renly repeated softly. “You bring that word into my tent as if it buys you wisdom.” His eyes narrowed. “You stood on my parley ground while Stannis’s red woman spoke in riddles and threats.”
Renly leaned closer. “Now answer the question that matters: Did you know your father raised banners for the Dragon Queen?”
Jon met his gaze. "I had no word of it before the parley."
"But you are not surprised."
"No."
"Why not?"
Because I have always known this could happen. Because I am the kind of secret that gets men killed.
"Because my father does what he believes is right," Jon said instead. "Even when it costs him everything. That is who he is."
"How touching." Renly's voice dripped with contempt. "The loyal bastard, defending his traitor father. Tell me, Jon Snow. Are you here to bind my Reach while Stark betrays me? Is that why you threw the joust? Is that why you refused my queen's favor? Were you waiting for the right moment to drive a knife into my back?"
"No."
"Then why did you urge talk when dragons were named?" Renly's voice rose for the first time. "Why did you try to make me look weak in front of my own men?"
"I was trying to keep you from making a mistake."
"A mistake." Renly laughed, but there was no humor in it. "You think I need lessons from a bastard? From a boy who has never held a castle, never commanded an army, never done anything but swing a sword and brood in corners?"
Jon felt the anger rise, hot and familiar. The Force stirred around him, answering emotion the way it always did. He pushed it down. Buried it. Luke's voice echoed in his memory: Feel it. Name it. Do not let it steer you.
"I think," Jon said quietly, “that you are used to winning rooms.”
He kept his voice even. "That you have eighty thousand men who have never seen real war. I think you have lords who treat this march like a summer progress. And I think you cannot afford to look unsure, so you punish the first man who forces you to think." He paused. "When the real darkness comes, none of this will matter. They will kill both you and me all the same."
The silence that followed was absolute.
Renly's face went still. Pale. For a moment, Jon thought he had pushed too far. That Renly would end it here, in private, and call it justice.
Then the tent flap burst open.
Margaery Tyrell swept into the pavilion with dirt at the hem of her skirts and fury in her eyes. Two of her handmaidens trailed behind her, but she waved them back with a sharp gesture.
"Your Grace." Her voice was clipped. Controlled. "I would speak with you."
"Now is not the time, my queen." Renly finally turned his head, and the look he gave her was warning wrapped in courtesy. “The camp is unstable.”
"Now is precisely the time." Margaery stepped between them, forcing Renly to acknowledge her. “Your order has turned your camp into a stage for panic.”
She pointed back toward the flap. “Your men and mine were a breath from fighting. A Baratheon captain told me, in front of Reachmen, that my voice does not matter.”
Loras flinched at that. Brienne’s jaw tightened.
Renly’s expression flickered, irritation breaking through his calm. “They were following my command.”
“And they were failing at it,” Margaery said. “You wanted quiet. You got shouting. You got steel in the mud. You got fear spreading faster than any raven. And now Oberyn Martell has taken our guests into Dornish lines as if he is the only man here who remembers what guest right means.”
Renly’s gaze snapped back to Jon. “Fear did not appear from thin air.”
Margaery did not deny it. She chose her words with care.
“Then deal with the truth, not the noise.” Her eyes cut to Jon, then back to Renly. “Jon Snow is the only Stark in your reach. He is leverage. If you kill him, you make the North your enemy forever. You also hand Stannis a story he can shout from dawn to dusk. That you murdered a hostage because you were afraid.”
Renly’s mouth tightened. “He lied to me.”
“But how did he lie?” Margaery said. “By all accounts, Jon has been with in the Reach for over a moon. Long before Lord Stark had any negations with Daenerys Targaryen. The way I see it, Jon spoke to keep two armies from tearing each other apart”
Renly stared at her for a long moment. Jon could feel the room shifting, the balance changing by degrees.
Then the tent flap opened again.
Lady Olenna Tyrell entered the pavilion.
The Queen of Thorns moved slowly, leaning on her cane with each step. But her eyes were sharp as ever, taking in the scene with a single sweeping glance. The guards who had tried to stop her trailed behind, looking helpless.
"Well," Olenna said, settling into a chair that no one had offered her. "What a mess you've made of things."
"Lady Olenna." Renly's voice was strained. "This is a private matter."
"Nothing is private when your knights are shouting in my lines." Olenna fixed him with a stare that could have stripped paint from stone. "A bolt flew. Men put hands on weapons. Your queen had to command grown soldiers like naughty boys. And they answered her with your name."
Margaery’s face held a pale, contained rage.
"A living Stark is leverage," Olenna continued, her voice flat and hard. "A dead Stark is waste. The camp is tinder. A king who strikes flint inside his own host will burn with it."
Renly's hands clenched into fists at his sides. Jon could see the war behind his eyes. Pride against pragmatism. Anger against survival.
"Very well," Renly said at last. His voice was clipped. Controlled. "Lord Snow will be held." He paused, and the pause was theater. "As a guest."
He turned to face Jon, and there was no warmth in his expression. “A guest who does not leave. You will remain in this camp until your father's position is clarified. You will write to him. You will tell him that I am willing to negotiate."
Renly’s eyes hardened. “And you will make it clear that your safety depends on his cooperation. If the North moves against me, you will pay for it first.”
Jon let his breath out slow through his nose. Time. That was all he needed. Time for the pieces to shift on the board before someone swept them off entirely.
He could feel the weight of every gaze in the pavilion—Olenna's shrewd assessment, Margaery's cold fury, Loras coiled like a wound spring. Brienne stood at Renly's shoulder, her hand resting on her sword hilt, and Jon wondered who he would have to battle, if the order came.
Just a few more days. The thought settled in his chest like a stone. Luke would come. He had to believe that. The Jedi had crossed stars and stranger distances; a few leagues of Westerosi road should be nothing.
But faith was a thin shield against a king's patience wearing through.
Jon nodded once. “I understand, Your Grace.”
Renly’s mouth twitched, almost a smile. Not kindness. Calculation.
“Good.” Renly let that hang, then added, “But there is another matter.”
Margaery’s posture tightened.
Renly’s gaze did not leave Jon. “My brother Robert is dead. The realm remembers who it blames.” His voice stayed smooth. “It does not remember proof. It remembers the tale that gets repeated. Whispers of Eddard Stark sending knives for a king he could not command and now, it all makes sense.”
Jon felt it then, sharp as a hook under the ribs. Renly was choosing the Lannister tale because it served him, and he was choosing it on purpose.
Renly continued, calm as a man describing the weather. “So here is the story I will give them. Your father had his best friend murdered so he could raises banners for a dragon queen. He courts foreign fire.”
Renly’s eyes narrowed. “Tell me now, why I should keep the son alive, when the father has every reason to see me dead.”
Brienne’s fingers tightened on her hilt. Loras looked from Renly to Jon in confusion.
Jon kept his voice level. “Because killing me will not make you safer. It will make you predictable. Every lord will see what you do with hostages.”
Renly’s smile sharpened. “Every lord already sees that I will do what must be done.”
“That is not what you mean,” Jon said. He took a breath, then stepped into the knife-edge anyway. “You mean to bind the Reach to you with blood. If you kill me, you make my father your enemy for life. You make the Tyrells your enemies too, because they will share the blame. All for a throne you do not have the right to claim, over your brother.”
Olenna’s eyes flicked, quick and cold. Margaery’s hand curled into her skirt.
Renly spread his hands slightly. “A king needs a story that holds. If Stark vengeance is inevitable, better it comes while the Reach is chained to me by fear.”
Jon stared at him. “You are admitting you would rather be believed than be right.”
Renly’s voice stayed mild. “I would rather be alive.”
Margaery stepped forward, breath quick. “Renly! This is madness!”
Renly did not look at her. “It is rule.”
Jon took a step forward as he felt his temper spike, and his control slip a fraction. “You want to execute me for a crime you do not believe happened.”
Brienne moved at once. Steel whispered as she drew, placing herself between Jon and Renly.
“Stay where you are,” she said, voice tight.
Jon stopped. Not because of her sword, but because he felt how badly Renly wanted the excuse. He forced his hands to unclench.
Renly watched him with bright, hungry interest. “There he is.”
Across the table, the wine in a half-filled goblet trembled. A few pale ripples chased each other over the surface, too neat to be from any footstep. Olenna’s eyes dropped to it for a single heartbeat, then lifted back to Jon’s face. Her grip tightened on her cane, not in fear, but in calculation.
Olenna’s voice cut in, crisp. “Enough posturing. If you mean to keep him, keep him. If you mean to kill him, you will do it with my granddaughter watching and my banners around you, in full light, with the whole camp close enough to count breaths. No back-canvas work. No convenient tale afterward. And then you will enjoy the war you have bought.”
Renly’s jaw tightened. For a beat, it looked like Olenna had him.
Margaery’s voice broke through, too fast. “Wait!”
Renly looked at her at last. “What now?”
Margaery swallowed. Her eyes flicked to Jon, then to Loras, and something in her expression pleaded without words.
"Brother." Her voice was soft, urgent. "Please. Speak to him. Make him see reason."
Loras's face twisted. Whatever bound him to Renly was there in the look he could not quite hide.
"Margaery."
"You know him better than anyone," she said, and the words came out too sharp, too true for the room they were in. She stepped closer to Loras, lowering her voice, but not low enough. “Please. Help me stop him before he does something that cannot be undone.”
“Enough,” Olenna snapped. Her cane tapped once, sharp as a gavel, and her eyes stayed on Jon a fraction too long, as if weighing the way the air had changed around him.
Margaery flinched and fell silent, but the damage was done. Brienne’s eyes flicked between siblings. Jon saw Loras go rigid, as if every secret in his body had been struck like a bell.
Then Jon felt it.
The headache that had plagued him all morning surged, sudden and vicious, driving into his skull like a spike of ice. His vision blurred. His teeth ached with a cold that had nothing to do with the weather. The Force screamed at him, a wordless alarm that drowned out everything else.
Outside the pavilion, Ghost began to howl.
"What is that?" Brienne started.
The candles died.
Every flame in the pavilion guttered and went out in the same instant, as if an invisible hand had smothered them. The braziers followed, their coals turning from orange to grey in the space of a heartbeat. Darkness crashed into the tent like a wave.
Jon's breath misted in the air. The temperature was dropping, falling faster than should have been possible. Frost began to form on the metal fixtures, spreading across steel and gold.
"What sorcery is this?" Loras's voice went thin. Jon heard steel rasp against leather as the Knight of Flowers drew his sword.
Brienne had moved toward Renly, positioning herself between her king and the corners where shadows gathered, thickened, and turned wrong.
Jon saw it take shape.
The shadows peeled away from the canvas walls like oil sliding across water. They pooled together in the center of the tent, rising, forming something that looked almost like a man.
It had Stannis Baratheon's face.
But wrong. The features were too sharp, too perfect, like a death mask carved from black stone. The eyes were holes into nothing. Where there should have been a body, there was only darkness given form.
The shadow turned its head. It looked at Renly.
And it smiled.
"No!" Brienne lunged, her sword cutting through the air. The blade passed through the shadow like smoke.
Loras attacked from the other side, fast and precise. His steel met nothing. The shadow did not react.
Jon grabbed a candelabra from the table. The metal burned with cold through his gloves. He swung it with all his strength, aiming for the shadow’s head.
The iron passed through without resistance.
The uselessness of it landed at once, clean and sickening.
And in that same instant, the shadow moved.
It did not wait for Jon to think. It flowed past Brienne’s guard as if her body was only air, and its arm lengthened into a black blade.
And struck Renly through the chest.
The king made a small sound, surprised more than anything. Blood spilled across gold and green, dark against the pale frost forming on his armor.
Loras screamed. The noise ripped out of him.
Brienne threw herself at the shadow again, striking and striking. Her sword passed through it every time.
Renly staggered. His knees hit the frozen floor. His gloved hand pressed to the wound as if he could hold himself together by force.
Jon’s eyes locked on the shadow. He felt it then. Heat inside it. A furnace hidden under the dark, a thread of fire that did not belong to any natural thing. The sensation tore through his mind and with it came the image of red silk and a jeweled throat. The woman on the parley ground, watching him as if she had already measured him.
Melisandre.
Renly swayed, trying to breathe. His mouth opened. No words came.
Jon stopped looking at steel. He stopped looking for a place to cut.
He reached for the Force with one need. End it.
Jon ripped the heat out of the pavilion.
The warmth fled in a violent instant. Frost raced across the canvas walls. Ice crusted over silk and leather. The maps on the table curled as moisture froze.
The shadow shuddered. For the first time it had edges. Ice crystals snapped into place along its outline, turning its shape visible, not as a man, but as a wound in the air given a skin of frost.
Olenna kept her eyes on Jon’s hands.
Brienne and Loras saw it too. So did Margaery, frozen in place with both hands at her mouth.
The shadow tried to move again, as if to finish what it started.
Jon pulled harder.
Crystals burst outward in a hard spray. The shadow broke apart along the lines Jon forced into it, splitting into tatters of darkness that whipped across the tent like torn cloth. Then the pieces thinned, bled into the canvas, and were gone.
Renly collapsed forward onto the frozen floor. Blood steamed faintly where it hit the ice.
Jon’s legs gave out. He hit the ground on one knee, then both. His vision narrowed. His ears rang. His hands shook so badly he could not still them.
But he stayed conscious.
Around him, the pavilion had become a nightmare. Renly lay dead in a spreading pool of blood gone thick with cold. Loras was on his knees beside the body, his scream collapsing into harsh breathing. Brienne stood rigid, sword still raised, face wrecked.
Margaery had not moved. She stared at her husband’s corpse as if staring could change time.
Olenna moved first.
"Close the tent." Her voice was sharp, commanding her twin guards who entered in a panic. "No one enters. No one leaves. We have minutes before this camp tears itself apart."
"He's dead," Loras said, hollow. "He's dead. He's dead. He's dead."
"Yes." Olenna’s cane tapped against the frozen floor as she moved toward him. "He is dead. And if you do not pull yourself together in the next thirty seconds, we will all join him."
She turned to Brienne, who still hadn't lowered her sword.
"You. Girl. Did you see what killed him?"
Brienne's mouth worked. No sound came out.
"I saw it," Jon forced out. His voice came rough, scraped by the cold he had called into being. "A shadow. Wearing Stannis's face. Steel couldn't touch it."
"Sorcery," Olenna said. Her voice went flat. "The red woman."
"Yes."
Olenna’s gaze shifted back to Jon. It did not hold fear. It held assessment, the same way it had held the camp together outside. “And you made it break.”
Jon had no answer for that. Nothing that would help him.
Outside the pavilion, Ghost was still howling. The sound cut through canvas like a wound.
"We need to move," Olenna said. "Now. Before the camp realizes their king is dead."
Margaery finally stirred. Her hands dropped. Her eyes moved from Renly's body to Jon, and Jon saw it there, plain and dangerous.
She understood what Renly planned for Jon. She also understood what Jon could do, even if she did not have words for it.
"Grandmother is right," Margaery said, steady by force of will. "We have to contain this." She swallowed once. “Loras.”
"Don't touch me," Loras snarled, jerking away from her reaching hand. His eyes were wild. Broken. "Don't touch me. Don't speak to me. This is your fault. All of you. You brought this into our camp, and now he's…"
He could not finish. The words broke into a sound that was half sob, half rage.
Brienne finally lowered her sword. She looked at her hands as if they belonged to someone else.
"I failed him," she whispered. "I swore to protect him, and I failed."
"We will grieve later," Olenna said coldly. "Margaery, take charge. You are the queen. Act like it."
Margaery straightened. The court-mask slid back into place, hiding whatever she truly felt. She turned to Brienne, voice calm and hard.
"Lady Brienne. Guard the entrance. No one enters without my permission. Not soldiers. Not lords. Not servants."
Brienne nodded, discipline taking over through shock. She moved to the tent flap and held her ground.
"Loras." Margaery’s voice softened, just a little. "Breathe. Hold together for one hour. Can you do that? For him?"
The Knight of Flowers looked at his sister. Looked at Renly. Something in his face hardened into survival.
"One hour," he said. Empty. Controlled.
Margaery turned to Jon.
"Can you walk?"
Jon pushed himself to his feet. His legs trembled. His hands would not stop shaking. But he stood.
"Yes."
"Good." She held his gaze a fraction too long. “Because your life just became more dangerous, and so did mine.”
Comments
whiskeylovingbibliophile
Lol, first Lyanna and now Ned! Poor Jon — forever catching the fallout from other people’s choices. My boy really can’t catch a break 🥲
Justin Archibald
This is an amazing chapter. Renly the useless died a useless death as Canon. Now we will see what his forces do before the news breaks. I think depending on how this is handled most of the Baratheon men will go to Stannis, as I would not doubt he has men placed to pin the blame on Jon. Obviously the Tyrells and the Dornish will be pushed off either southwest towards Dorne, or West towards the Rose Road.
Winter
This got messier again
Winter
Ah fuck
Mandragoran
Great chapter! Good ole chaos rearing its ugly head all over the place in the camp
Blake Thomason
Awesome update! Keep it up!
BlueBuck
Heart pumping and blood rushing
Full Horizon
Thank you! This one did take a few more days to get right.
Hannan Potashman
Thank you for the chapter. It was very very well written!
Full Horizon
❤️
Full Horizon
That’s depends on who’s asking lol
Victory For The People
Good chapter!
IS6A6E
Well, hopefully Jon won’t get blamed for this.
