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[Kill The Boy] Chapter 56: Messages from the Fire

🕑 Added 2025-12-21 00:04:08 +0000 UTC

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Ragnar

give her the horn

Jason

That was the first out and out poor chapter you’ve released so far. It was basically spending the first 8 minutes of a half hour episode on an opening song and a recap… Sam had almost the same dialogue as last chapter’s ending for a good quarter of that conversation. Little Finger’s POV showed us absolutely nothing and gave us questions that we don’t have enough information to care about the answers to yet. It could have just as easily been a paragraph or two in hindsight explaining the sorcerous message when he actually is wherever he’s going to meet that messenger. The story was moving at a really good clip until it was time for important characters or factions to cross paths… I get it, you want things to feel dramatic, but delaying and repeating yourself is not the way. To be clear, the quality of the writing hasn’t degraded, it’s still great, and I have no real issue with things taking time to develop, but my issue with the particular chapter is that it seems to serve no real purpose outside of delaying Jon’s arrival in Dorne. If you had given us a look at what’s going on in other locations it would have felt a lot more natural than the way this chapter played out.

Winter

Delaying the inevitable

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I hope the crossroad is a trap set by Bran!! It makes sense considering the raven outside the window. Gods, I just want to be knocked out for 2 weeks and just wake up to see all the updated contents of Kill the boy….

matt sinco

In chapter 55 Sam tells Dany about the fleet and why they shouldn't come

Full Horizon

The meeting shall happen but it's a long flight! 😉

Full Horizon

It's still a long flight from Riverlands to Dorne, who knows what might happen 👀

Mandragoran

You’re killing me with the delay in Jon and Dany meeting up lol

IS6A6E

Whose contacting Littlefinger? I want to say the Others, but I'm not sure. And Jon doesn't know about the ledgers or the dagger, so I'm guessing it's some trap. Also, don't worry about character interactions; you're doing amazing. But gosh, this chapter makes me mad. Because I'm just dying for Jon to show up and I'm getting so much tease, I guess it'll make his entrance all the more badass when he does swoop in. Wonder how Dany will react when she learns her last living relative turns into a Dragon.


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