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Nero Walker, Book 3 Ch.40 (155)

🕑 Added 2024-04-17 22:30:00 +0000 UTC

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Osama Laden

Come on!!!!👍👍👍👍🦍🦍🦍🦍💥💥💥🧍‍♂️🧍‍♂️🧍‍♂️🧑🏿‍🦽

Ocean Breeze

That's really decent feedback. This is not something that has bothered me personally, but it's very possible that it would if I was reading this as a book instead of chapter by chapter.

Brisyngr

Thank you for the chapter. I suck at giving neutral feedback but imma try anyway. All these misunderstandings/emotional whiplash and acting stupid/smart is slowly distracting from the overarching story for me. I really like the world you are building but pretty much every chapter i get annoyed at the character interactions and thoughts. I just feel like the story is getting even more extreme in thise regards, like Nero is regressing in maturity and has in my eyes negative character growth. Hope my wordvomit was understandable and not discouraging ^^


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