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Nero Walker, Book 3 Ch.22 (137)

🕑 Added 2024-03-22 22:30:01 +0000 UTC

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Leetle Sheet

Thanks! I really want to write more little side stories and stuff, but I haven't really had the time. So much is going on in the background, that it's hard to limit what I put in to only relevant events that pertain to the MC.

Mad Man M

I love the different perspectives - it adds heaps to the storey and makes it so interesting - as long as you don’t make them too long (which they haven’t been) and we get back to the MC antics in good time then they are prefect. I love your writing style, it’s very refreshing

Leetle Sheet

Maybe I went a little overboard, but I really wanted to show how despite their differences, motivations, and backgrounds, the culture here is all about coming together when it matters. In my head, I figured people might assume (rightfully so) that the people in charge might try and take advantage of the situation to bring down their enemies and raise their own position in the city. I didn't want that. I wanted the focus to remain on the threat and to show the other side of the political machine that has been screwing with Nero since he'd arrived. I might have take it too far, but I like the characters and didn't mind giving them their moment on the page.

stakadi wer

I feel like some prechapters [the begining of the chapter] are excessive and redundant, while i do love some of them and they may show the motivation of side characters . Do we really need to see the threat from 3 different prespectives? I feel like its not moving the story forward and focusing on the unimportant.


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